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Write Right - Defence Academy of the United Kingdom

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TautologyThey laughed happily as <strong>the</strong>y collaborated toge<strong>the</strong>r on <strong>the</strong> project.AnonTautology is <strong>the</strong> repetition <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> same idea or meaning in a phrase orsentence, as in a free gift (all gifts are free), a new innovation and lonelyisolation. We tend to commit this fault when we want to be emphatic.Avoid for instance, associating most or very with such words as ideal orperfect, which are <strong>the</strong>mselves <strong>the</strong> highest degree possible. Soexpressions such as exclusive monopoly or most absolute would also bewrong.Here are some examples. Redundant words are shown in brackets:The work <strong>of</strong> this branch is not limited (only) to legal matters.Only one additional (new) pilot has joined <strong>the</strong> sqn.The regiment returned (back) to its starting point.The reason is (because) <strong>the</strong>re are none left.We continued (on) with our 2 (fellow) companions.The Stn Cdr is in a position <strong>of</strong> (lonely) isolation.The words in brackets can be dropped from <strong>the</strong>ir sentence without anyloss <strong>of</strong> sense because <strong>the</strong>ir meanings are contained in o<strong>the</strong>r words. Thiskind <strong>of</strong> tautology is not good style and you should avoid it, especially inwriting.19

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