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<strong>The</strong> Hong Kong Institute of Education<br />

Faculty of Languages, Arts and Science<br />

Teaching <strong>English</strong> through Language Arts at<br />

Secondary School (BWC 038)<br />

Curriculum Renewal with Language Arts:<br />

Principles & Process (ENG 0229E) Task II (b)<br />

Resource Pack on Popular Culture<br />

<strong>The</strong>me: Gender stereotyping<br />

April – June 2009<br />

<strong>Lecturer</strong>: <strong>Ms</strong>. <strong>Jenny</strong> <strong>Lim</strong><br />

Level : Form 5 or NSS 2 EMI Band 1<br />

Name: MT


Summery sheet of text types<br />

Part Activities Teaching resources Duration<br />

A Photos and comic<br />

B TV<br />

strips analysis –<br />

photo captions &<br />

essay<br />

commercials –<br />

slogan writing &<br />

oral presentation<br />

C Films analysis –<br />

Objectives:<br />

advice column &<br />

interview<br />

Photos from the web<br />

Source:<br />

http://www.cartoonstock.com/direc<br />

tory/g/gender_role.asp<br />

http://www.tellyads.com/show_mov<br />

ie.php?filename=TA5773<br />

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=<br />

vHLnC7dZoVY&feature=PlayList&p=<br />

985DDAFBAD271BCD&index=0<br />

Billy Elliot & Bend it like Beckham<br />

Trailer:<br />

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=<br />

JoiVEyCosEE&feature=fvst<br />

By the end of the lessons, students will be able to:<br />

1<br />

8 lessons<br />

5 lessons<br />

8 lessons<br />

� be aware how culture or mass media shape the gender differences<br />

� be critical about what messages they receive from the media<br />

� think critically and understand themselves<br />

� express themselves freely in <strong>English</strong><br />

� understand, interpret ideas, information, opinions and intentions<br />

presented in various text types<br />

� develop the vocabulary, language, format and styles used in different<br />

text types<br />

� apply the knowledge and skills they have learnt in their creative<br />

production and appreciation of popular culture texts


Part A Photo Analysis<br />

Discuss in groups of 4, who is the target group to buy the toys in the photos.<br />

A.<br />

B.<br />

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What toys did you play when you were small?<br />

What kinds of toys do you think girls / boys play?<br />

Girls’ toys:<br />

Boys’ toys:<br />

Is there a difference? Why?<br />

Work with your partner. Write down a list of adjectives that you will use for boys<br />

and girls.<br />

Adjectives describing boys Adjectives describing girls<br />

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Vocabulary building<br />

Read the list of words below. Put an “F” next to those that describe females and<br />

an “M” next to those that describe males. “B” for both.<br />

adventurous aggressive charming ambitious bossy blunt<br />

brave muscular competitive cool considerate handsome<br />

clever cute dainty decisive dependent domineering<br />

charismatic emotional giggly gossipy graceful heroic<br />

independent lovely nagging passive practical troublesome<br />

romantic sentimental sexy sensitive soft strong<br />

submissive supportive sweet talkative tender timid<br />

tough tranquil rebellious imaginative athletic unemotional<br />

objective analytical logical rational trustworthy docile<br />

violent hostile introverted extroverted slim sensible<br />

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Question for Thought:<br />

Why do we use some adjectives for boys and some others for girls?<br />

Have we created a stereotype for different gender? Try to think of some<br />

examples of gender stereotypes and discuss with the class.<br />

Male Female<br />

e.g. Men don’t cry.<br />

5<br />

e.g. A good housewife<br />

needs to cook well.


1.<br />

2.<br />

“No, this is not Mel’s secretary. This is Mel.”<br />

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Read the two comic strips and discuss with your partner. Is there a gender<br />

stereotype in the two comic strips?<br />

Work in pairs.<br />

Create the dialogue and the thought bubble for the characters.<br />

Source: http://www.cartoonstock.com/directory/g/gender_role.asp<br />

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Portrayal of gender in print media<br />

Photo A Caption:____________________<br />

Photo B Caption:________________<br />

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Photo C Caption: ______________________<br />

Photo D<br />

Caption: ________________<br />

Photo E<br />

Caption: _________________<br />

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Writing Photo captions and essay<br />

Form groups of 4, collect 5-10 magazine advertisements/covers/photos which<br />

are about gender roles and stereotypes.<br />

1. Write a photo caption for each of the photos. (Each student needs to write 4<br />

captions individually)<br />

2. Give feedback on each others’ captions. Revise them if necessary.<br />

3. Write one or two paragraphs on the collection of photos.<br />

4. Present the photos and captions on a poster.<br />

5. Give an oral presentation of the collection of photos in class, explaining how<br />

these photos give us insights into gender roles and stereotypes. Classmates<br />

give oral feedback.<br />

6. Post up the posters in class. Classmates give written feedback if they wish.<br />

Photo Caption – a sentence that answers some of the questions below.<br />

An additional sentence may be added to give more details if needed.<br />

Who is being captured in the photo?<br />

What is he/she doing?<br />

Where was the photo taken?<br />

When was the photo taken?<br />

Why was the photo taken?<br />

Photo Essay – a story told in photos with some statements<br />

Write one or two paragraphs for the collection of photos, addressing these<br />

issues:<br />

- What gender characteristics are portrayed in the photos?<br />

- What is the story or message conveyed in the photos?<br />

(References: South China Morning Post Photo Essay<br />

http://www.time.com/time/photoessays)<br />

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Language and structures<br />

1. Present tense and active verbs are used<br />

e.g. Pretty and sexy girls appear in one of the most popular women’s<br />

magazines, defining the concept of modern beauty. (Photo A)<br />

e.g. Christy Chung poses for her latest slimming advertisement. (Photo B)<br />

2. Adverbial clauses are used to define or provide details of the subject.<br />

e.g. A young executive, showing a big grin on her cheerful face, is heading<br />

success in career. (Photo D)<br />

e.g. A model, selling beauty products, is asking customers to go green. (Photo<br />

E)<br />

Rubrics for photo captions and essay are adapted from:<br />

http://www.pbs.org/wnet/americanmasters/education/lesson27_organizer3.h<br />

tml<br />

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Rubrics for photo captions<br />

Requirements Points<br />

Available<br />

Does the presentation have a minimum of 5<br />

photographs?<br />

Do the photographs demonstrate a variety<br />

of images and perspectives?<br />

Can the captions describe accurately the<br />

photographs?<br />

Are all of the photographs mounted on a<br />

poster in a logical and aesthetic manner?<br />

Do the photographs follow a central theme? 10<br />

Essay<br />

12<br />

5<br />

20<br />

20<br />

Requirements Points<br />

Available<br />

Effective narrative in telling the story of the<br />

event, concept, issue represented by the<br />

photographs<br />

Accurate grammar and spelling 10<br />

Does the paragraph fully explain the choice<br />

of the photos in the collection?<br />

Total: _____________<br />

5<br />

20<br />

10<br />

Points<br />

Earned<br />

Points<br />

Earned


I. Ideas & Organization<br />

Feedback form for group presentation<br />

1. Can convey relevant ideas clearly and<br />

fluently<br />

2. Can elaborate in detail<br />

3. Can link main points with support<br />

II. Communication Strategies<br />

1. Can use appropriate body language to<br />

engage interest<br />

2. Can judge timing to cover all essential<br />

points<br />

III. Language & Vocabulary<br />

1. Can use accurate language patterns<br />

2. Can use a wide range of appropriate<br />

vocabulary<br />

IV. Pronunciation & Delivery<br />

1. Can project the voice appropriately<br />

2. Can pronounce words clearly and<br />

accurately<br />

3. Can speak fluently and naturally<br />

Excellent Good Fairly<br />

13<br />

good<br />

Needs<br />

(Adapted from SBA Assessment Criteria for Individual Presentation)<br />

improvement


Part B TV commercials<br />

Watch the two TV commercials and write down what you see.<br />

http://www.tellyads.com/show_movie.php?filename=TA5773<br />

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vHLnC7dZoVY&feature=PlayList&p=985D<br />

DAFBAD271BCD&index=0<br />

What kind of gender symbols do the TV commercials try to convey?<br />

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Can you think of other examples? Discuss that in groups of 4.<br />

Watch these two TV commercials.<br />

Gillette M3 Power<br />

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UFYWtGO3Fkw<br />

Lancome Magnifique<br />

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qPvqUxlQPaw<br />

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What advertising techniques have been used?<br />

Work in groups 4, think of a product and create an advertisement for it.<br />

Add a slogan. Your presentation is about three minutes.<br />

Additional information for reference:<br />

Source: http://www.epromos.com/educationCenter/qus11.jsp<br />

34 Ways to Write a Slogan<br />

1. Ask a question<br />

Does she or doesn't she? -Clairol<br />

2. Show your unique commitment<br />

We try harder -Avis<br />

3. Explain product superiority<br />

Takes a licking and keeps on ticking -Timex<br />

4. Evoke a benefit in a fresh way<br />

Let your fingers do the walking -Yellow Pages<br />

5. Use an emotive call to action<br />

Reach out and touch someone -AT&T<br />

6. Use an evocative call to action<br />

Put a tiger in your tank -Esso<br />

7. Use an imperative call to action<br />

Just do it -Nike<br />

8. Use a one-word call to action<br />

Think -IBM<br />

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9. Use a cheeky call to action<br />

Let us tan your hide -Crisby Frisian Fur Co.<br />

10. Revisit a familiar call to action<br />

Reach out and bust someone -Crime Stoppers<br />

11. Link a product feature with an abstract need<br />

A diamond is forever -DeBeers<br />

12. Link a feature with your address<br />

We corner the market -Irving Rivers Ltd.<br />

13. Combine a feature and a benefit in the same phrase<br />

Make yourself at home -IKEA<br />

14. Declare a superlative feature<br />

<strong>The</strong> world's #1 selling financial software -Quicken<br />

15. Make a compelling promise<br />

<strong>The</strong> world on time -Federal Express<br />

16. Be whimsical<br />

It's the real thing -Coca-Cola<br />

17. Say it staccato<br />

Soothes. Cleanses. Refreshes. -Murine eyedrops<br />

18. Use a two-fold delivery with a twist<br />

Common sense. Uncommon results -David Ingram and Associates<br />

19. Address a specific need<br />

For women whose eyes are older than they are -Robert Powers skin cream<br />

20. Be abstract but client-centered<br />

After all, it is your information -Authentex Software<br />

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21. Describe your product in a novel way<br />

Liquid jewelry -Lorr Laboratories nail polish<br />

22. Link company name to product benefit<br />

Never forgets -Elephant Memory Systems<br />

23. Suggest the cost of not using your product<br />

Because so much is riding on your tires -Michelin<br />

24. Be grotesque to make a point<br />

Wears like a pig's nose -W. M. Finck & Co. men's overalls<br />

25. Turn a current business maxim on its ear<br />

Think small -Volkswagen<br />

26. Link a well-known phrase with your product benefit<br />

Understanding comes with Time -Time magazine<br />

27. Brag about yourself<br />

We take the world's greatest pictures -Nikon<br />

28. Brag about your product and your client<br />

You and Betty Crocker can bake someone happy -Betty Crocker<br />

29. Take a breath and say it all<br />

Finest anti-knock non-premium gasoline ever offered at no extra cost -Union<br />

Oil Co.<br />

30. Describe your service and its #1 benefit in two words<br />

Advertising pays -Industry maxim<br />

31. Personify your product<br />

Laughs at time -Du Pont paint<br />

32. Distill your business into one phrase<br />

<strong>The</strong> Document Company -Xerox Corp.<br />

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33. Tie your slogan to your logo<br />

Get a piece of the Rock -Prudential Insurance Co.<br />

34. Dare to be different<br />

Dare to diff -LOEB Cola<br />

Source: http://www.qualitylogoproducts.com/lib/how-to-write-a-slogan.htm#<br />

Another 34 Ways to Write a Slogan<br />

1.) Keep it Short<br />

Average slogan length is five words. Boil down the entire essence of the product or service into this<br />

prevailing statement.<br />

2.) Don’t Use the Brand Name<br />

Given the cost of advertising today, use the words of the slogan to make an impact<br />

3.) Use Simple Language<br />

High-tech industries know that the common individual will not understand all the technical terms.<br />

4.) Set the Tone<br />

Declarative structuring makes a statement: “A diamond is forever.” Interrogatives question the<br />

status quo. “Got milk?”<br />

5.) Command Attention<br />

Use imperative phrasing. This method commands or persuades buyers to patronize your brand.<br />

6.) State the Difference<br />

“Have it your way.” Burger King revolutionized the standard in fast food ordering, and caused<br />

competitors to follow suit.<br />

7.) Rethink Spelling<br />

Many famous companies utilize the particular letters in their corporate/brand name and purposely<br />

use those same letters throughout the phrase.<br />

8.) Improper Grammar<br />

“Don’t just book it, Thomas Cook it,” turned the cruise line name into a verb.<br />

9.) Rhetoric Sells<br />

Slogans use alliteration, metaphor, repetition, or some other type of word play.<br />

10.) Make-Up Your Own Words<br />

Inventing new words from others can set the phrase apart.<br />

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11.) Verbal Impression<br />

When you only have a few words to make the statement, go out on a limb. Smarties used<br />

“WotalotIgot!”<br />

12.) Find a Unique Facet<br />

Make a list of the advantages of your product. Note the one or two things you have to offer over the<br />

competition and create a slogan that states it.<br />

13.) Think Green<br />

With environmental issues at the forefront, aim for a slogan that assures the consumer a purchase<br />

with low impact on the planet.<br />

14.) Target a Concern<br />

Focus on current concerns relevant to your product and use language that gets consumer attention.<br />

15.) State your Commitment<br />

Look at what the top 10 in your industry are rated for, and prove why your rating should be No. 1.<br />

16.) Identify Emotionally<br />

Whether funny or serious, eliciting an emotional response is important in soliciting customers.<br />

17.) Revisit Past Slogans<br />

Take an outdated, well-remembered phrase and change a word to apply to the specific product or<br />

service.<br />

18.) Paint a Word Picture<br />

Since the prevailing method of media now lies on the Internet, the trend has become “the picture” is<br />

worth a thousand words, and a slogan is the icing on the cake.<br />

19.) Link Your Logo<br />

Take the name(s) of the items/symbols in your logo and use those in the<br />

slogan or other logo products.<br />

20.) Use Anthropomorphism<br />

Apply human or animal characteristics to your product or service.<br />

21.) Tie Company Name to a Famous Saying<br />

Make the name match the goal or product offered.<br />

22.) Be Whimsical<br />

Try coming up with silly or amusing words to describe your company’s theme.<br />

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23.) Consider the Competition<br />

Look at all your competitor ads and search for the one thing that is missing which you can offer the<br />

consumer.<br />

24.) Use Opposites<br />

If you offer a small product by comparison to competition, try, “Think small.”<br />

25.) Compare and Contrast<br />

Use this method to cite the risks of failing to use your product or service.<br />

26.) Break the Mold<br />

If competitor ads tend to state the same thing, take a fresh approach in finding the right words.<br />

27.) Promise Something<br />

When your product has something the others do not, such as an unconditional money-back<br />

guarantee, express that as the heart of the slogan.<br />

28.) Focus on the Consumer<br />

Coming at consumers with their best interest at heart goes farther than touting the company’s<br />

advantages.<br />

29.) Use Sex-Appeal<br />

Everything from cars to food uses this method of getting consumer attention. Try working it into your<br />

slogan.<br />

30.) Forget the Hype<br />

Hype is overblown claims, unsupported superlatives and is generally no longer believed.<br />

31.) Be Universal<br />

Consider the market in Japan or other countries and ensure you use ideas not only Americans<br />

understand.<br />

32.) Proof It<br />

If current or near-future trends can affect your sales, think about a slogan that will be successful in<br />

a slow economy.<br />

33.) Prove It<br />

Truthfully citing a million satisfied customers offers security in dealing with your company.<br />

34.) Test It<br />

Try your slogan out on co-workers, family, and friends. Going out on the streets to interview<br />

potential customers, gives information as to what consumers really think.<br />

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Adapted from:<br />

http://www.tenafly.k12.nj.us/~wjaeger/grading_rubrics.htm#Slogan<br />

Slogan Rubric<br />

Category Excellent Average Below Average Total<br />

Content<br />

Visual<br />

Appearance<br />

Creative<br />

/Catchy<br />

Your slogan is an overarching<br />

idea or you choose the most<br />

important feature of your<br />

product to advertise.<br />

<strong>The</strong> slogan is displayed in a<br />

way that visually hooks the<br />

audience. <strong>The</strong> presentation is<br />

perfect (neat, clear and uses<br />

color to illuminate the view).<br />

Your slogan is written and<br />

worded in a creative way that<br />

hooks the audience.<br />

Your slogan<br />

captures a feature<br />

of your product.<br />

<strong>The</strong> slogan is<br />

displayed in a way<br />

that allows the<br />

audience to read the<br />

slogan. <strong>The</strong> words<br />

are easy to read.<br />

Your slogan is<br />

creative and written<br />

in a catchy way.<br />

22<br />

Your slogan does not<br />

capture a feature of<br />

your product.<br />

Your slogan is not<br />

easy to read on the<br />

poster board, there<br />

are few-no colors<br />

and does not catch<br />

the eye.<br />

Not very clever and<br />

creative when<br />

making your<br />

slogan. Your slogan<br />

is not catchy.<br />

Total Points:<br />

Points<br />

10<br />

5<br />

5


Group Presentation Rubric<br />

Category Excellent Average Below Average Total<br />

Content<br />

Communica<br />

tion Skills<br />

Enthusiasm<br />

/Tone<br />

You included content that<br />

highlights the most important<br />

features and details of your<br />

product. You conducted<br />

research outside of the<br />

textbook and handout<br />

materials.<br />

When doing your sales<br />

presentation you speak clearly,<br />

at a regular pace and you always<br />

have eye contact with your<br />

audience. Excellent speaking<br />

skills and the presentation is<br />

easy to follow.<br />

You are very spirited and<br />

energetic when giving your<br />

sales presentation. You always<br />

have a smile on your face and<br />

you have an upbeat voice. You<br />

generate a great deal of<br />

interest in your presentation.<br />

Persuasion You exemplify a true<br />

salesperson by using catchy<br />

words and sayings and you<br />

phrase the information in a<br />

convincing way. You state all<br />

of the information for your<br />

product positively. You take a<br />

negative trait and make it<br />

positive. Excellent job<br />

convincing others to settle in<br />

your product.<br />

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You include content that<br />

highlights features of<br />

your product and you<br />

include details.<br />

When doing your sales<br />

presentation the audience<br />

can follow your<br />

presentation and you have<br />

some eye contact with the<br />

audience. Good speaking<br />

skills.<br />

You generate interest<br />

when giving your sales<br />

presentation. Your voice<br />

is lively and you show<br />

expression in your face.<br />

When giving your sales<br />

presentation you use<br />

convincing words and<br />

phrases to help sell your<br />

product. Good job<br />

convincing others to<br />

settle in your product.<br />

You include content<br />

that does not highlight<br />

your product very well<br />

and you do not include<br />

much detail.<br />

<strong>The</strong> audience cannot<br />

follow what you are<br />

saying and either you<br />

are speaking quickly or<br />

slowly. Little-no eye<br />

contact with the<br />

audience.<br />

You do not show any<br />

interest in your sales<br />

presentation. Your<br />

voice is monotone and<br />

you do not have any<br />

facial expressions.<br />

You do not perform<br />

the sales presentation<br />

as a salesperson. You<br />

do not phrase the<br />

information in a<br />

catchy, convincing<br />

way. You do not<br />

explain to people why<br />

they should settle in<br />

your product.<br />

Total Points:<br />

Points<br />

5<br />

5<br />

5<br />

5


Part C Films<br />

Synopsis<br />

Billy Elliot is a heartwarming story of a young boy from a working-class family<br />

who discovers a passion that will change his life forever. Eleven-year-old<br />

miner’s son Billy Elliot is on his way to a boxing lesson when he stumbles upon a<br />

ballet class. Billy secretly joins the class, knowing that his father and brother<br />

would never understand. Under the guidance of his ballet teacher Mrs.<br />

Wilkinson, Billy’s talent takes flight. But when his father discovers his son’s<br />

ambition, Billy must fight for his dream and his destiny. Could Billy enter the<br />

Royal Ballet School and follow his heart’s desire?<br />

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In groups of 4, write down what hobbies boys and girls generally do. Discuss<br />

why there are such differences.<br />

Boys’ hobbies Girls’ hobbies<br />

Reason(s) for such differences:<br />

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Watching a trailer<br />

Watch the trailer and predict what the story is about. Work in groups of 4 and<br />

draft the storyline in the space provided.<br />

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JoiVEyCosEE&feature=fvst<br />

Storyline:<br />

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Watch the movie<br />

Chapter 2-5 I want to dance<br />

Discuss the following questions in pairs.<br />

1. Do you think Billy has a talent in ballet dancing? Give examples from the<br />

movie.<br />

2. What are Mr. Elliot’s arguments against Billy dancing?<br />

3. Do you think his arguments are justified? Explain.<br />

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Role Play<br />

Have you ever had something that you want to do and when you mention that<br />

to your parents, they just reject that idea at once? E.g. a course you want to<br />

join, a sport that you want to pick up, a camp you want to go…etc.<br />

Work in groups of 4, create a dialogue among you, your parent(s) and your<br />

sibling(s) / grandparent(s). Remember there must be a conflict in the dialogue.<br />

You feel that you are treated unfairly because of your gender.<br />

You will need to add it out with your groupmates later on.<br />

E.g.<br />

You:<br />

Mum:<br />

Mum, there’s something I want to talk to you.<br />

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After viewing<br />

Both Billy and Michael are different from the other boys of their age in the town.<br />

In what ways are they different from the other boys? How do they think about<br />

themselves being different? Fill in the chart and discuss with your groupmates.<br />

Billy<br />

Both<br />

different<br />

from the<br />

other boys:<br />

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Michael<br />

Do Billy and Michael stand up for their beliefs and accept their differences?<br />

Discuss in groups of four. How do you deal with your individual<br />

differences among your peers?


Synopsis<br />

Jesminder (known as Jess) is a Sikh teenage girl living in London who loves to<br />

play football more than anything else. But her parents disapprove and want<br />

her to study in university, learn to cook Indian dishes and marry an Indian boy<br />

in future. Meeting up with another girl, Jules, Jess joins a local girls’ football<br />

team in secret. Both girls (Jess and Jules) fall in love with their coach, Joe.<br />

On the wedding day of Jess’s sister, Pinky, Jess has an important match to<br />

play. Will she be able to appear in the final match? Will her parents let her<br />

fulfill her dream to join the professional league in the US?<br />

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Watching the Movie<br />

Chapter 1-2 (1:00-15:00)<br />

1. In what ways is Jess different from her sister Pinky and other girls of her age?<br />

2. Do you think playing football makes Jess less feminine? Why?<br />

<strong>The</strong> following contemporary vocabulary (which you probably wouldn’t find in a<br />

dictionary) may be useful to you. Note – some of these words have different<br />

meaning in a different context.<br />

barrel of laughs a lot of fun (but usually said ironically)<br />

dyke lesbian (slang)<br />

gloat take pleasure out of someone else’s misfortune<br />

piss himself be frightened<br />

piss off go away<br />

pissed drunk<br />

shag have sex<br />

strop bad temper/mood<br />

to be up for it to be enthusiastic about something<br />

wicked wonderful<br />

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Chapter 5 (35:00-45:00) Joe meets Jess’s parents<br />

Joe, the football coach, found that Jess had missed two training sessions which<br />

was unusual. He decided to visit Jess’s parents to see what had happened and<br />

to convince her parents to let her rejoin the team.<br />

What do you think Joe will say to Jess’s parents?<br />

What do you think Jess’s parents will answer?<br />

Joe cleared his throat. 'I'm<br />

sorry to barge in on you,<br />

Mr and Mrs Bhamra,' he<br />

said, 'but I wanted to talk<br />

to you in person. I only<br />

found out today that you<br />

didn't know Jess<br />

was playing for our team.'<br />

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……..


Try to predict what they will say.<br />

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Breaking Gender Stereotypes<br />

Work in groups of 4. Describe the following characters. You may want to use the<br />

adjectives in the vocabulary list. Do they have masculine or feminine qualities?<br />

Or do they possess both qualities?<br />

Support your answer with evidence of their actions or behaviour.<br />

Description<br />

Behaviour<br />

Jess Jules Joe<br />

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Chapter 6 (50:00-59:00)<br />

Jess is really upset. Her sister Pinky’s wedding has been called off. Her parents found<br />

that she had secretly gone to Hamburg, Germany, to play a football match. Most<br />

important of all, Jules hates her for falling in love with their coach, Joe.<br />

Jess is sharing her troubles with her friend, Tony. Imagine you were Tony, listening<br />

to what Jess is telling you:<br />

Jess said, “Oh! Tony, everything’s gone wrong in my life. Mum and Dad don’t like<br />

me playing football, but that’s what I want to do, you know, much more than<br />

being a boring solicitor! <strong>The</strong>y were angry when they knew I had sneaked to<br />

Hamburg. Should I withdraw from the team or should I continue playing?<br />

What’s worse is that Jules has hated me since we returned from Hamburg.<br />

Just now I went to her place and apologized to her, but it seems she won’t<br />

forgive me…. Pinky is still very upset. Her finance’s parents mistook that Jules<br />

was a British boy and we were kissing at the bus stop the other day. <strong>The</strong>y<br />

thought I was an indecent girl! What’s wrong with girls, like Jules, having short<br />

hair? And definitely we were not kissing each other!<br />

<strong>The</strong> next day, you decided to write a letter to Jess giving her some advice on her<br />

problems.<br />

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Writing an Advice Column<br />

1. A salutation to the recipient of the letter<br />

Eg. Dear Tom, Dear troubled Susan<br />

2. A statement showing your sympathy for the advice seeker<br />

Eg. I’m sorry to hear about your problem.<br />

3. A restatement of the problem of the advice-seeker<br />

Eg. So your father disapproves you becoming a dancer.<br />

4. Specific solutions<br />

Eg. Tell your father that you are very enthusiastic in dancing and you aim at<br />

becoming a professional dancer.<br />

5. Reasons for those solutions<br />

Eg. A professional dancer is a respectable career just like a sportsman or an<br />

actor.<br />

6. A closing statement that encourages the advice seeker<br />

Eg. Be brave to face the problem….Good luck with…<br />

7. Signature of the advice giver<br />

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Language and Structure<br />

1. Informal language such as Contractions<br />

Eg. Don’t, I’ll, You’d better<br />

2. Modal verbs are used to give advice: should, would, could, may, can, had<br />

better, need to, ought to, must<br />

Eg. You should tell your father….<br />

You had better find out….<br />

3. Conditionals are used to tell what might happen.<br />

Eg. If you are confused, you could…. If I were you, I would …….<br />

4. Present tense is used to give advice.<br />

Eg I bet you must be very disappointed with….<br />

It is understandable that fathers want their sons to be….<br />

5. Imperatives are used to give emphasis.<br />

Eg. Don’t give up! Try your best to….<br />

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Ideas &<br />

Content<br />

� main theme<br />

� supporting<br />

details<br />

Organization<br />

� structure<br />

� introduction<br />

� conclusion<br />

Voice<br />

� personality<br />

� sense of<br />

audience<br />

Word Choice<br />

� precision<br />

� effectiveness<br />

Sentence<br />

Fluency<br />

� rhythm, flow<br />

�variety<br />

Conventions<br />

� spelling, caps,<br />

punctuation,<br />

grammar<br />

Advice Column Rubric<br />

6 5 4 3 2 1<br />

Exceptionally clear,<br />

focused, engaging<br />

with relevant, strong<br />

supporting detail<br />

Effectively organized<br />

in logical and<br />

creative manner<br />

Creative and<br />

engaging intro and<br />

conclusion<br />

Expressive,<br />

engaging, sincere<br />

Strong sense of<br />

audience<br />

Shows emotion<br />

A wide range of<br />

vocabulary chosen,<br />

precise, Strong,<br />

High degree of<br />

craftsmanship<br />

Effective variation in<br />

sentence patterns<br />

Exceptionally strong<br />

control of standard<br />

conventions of<br />

writing<br />

Clear, focused,<br />

interesting ideas<br />

with appropriate<br />

detail<br />

Strong order and<br />

structure Inviting<br />

intro and satisfying<br />

closure<br />

Appropriate to<br />

audience and<br />

purpose<br />

Writer behind the<br />

words comes<br />

through<br />

A range of<br />

words chosen<br />

Easy flow and<br />

rhythm. Good<br />

variety in length<br />

and structure<br />

Strong control of<br />

conventions; errors<br />

are few and minor<br />

Evident main idea<br />

with some support<br />

which may be<br />

general or limited<br />

Organization is<br />

appropriate, but<br />

conventional<br />

Attempt at<br />

introduction and<br />

conclusion<br />

Evident<br />

commitment to topic<br />

Inconsistent or dull<br />

personality<br />

Language is<br />

functional and<br />

appropriate<br />

Generally in control<br />

Lack variety in<br />

length and structure<br />

Control of most<br />

writing conventions;<br />

occasional errors<br />

with high risks<br />

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Main idea may be<br />

cloudy because<br />

supporting detail is<br />

too general or even<br />

off-topic<br />

Attempts at<br />

organization; may<br />

be a “list” of events<br />

Beginning and<br />

ending not<br />

developed<br />

Voice may be<br />

inappropriate or<br />

non-existent<br />

Writing may seem<br />

mechanical<br />

Words may be<br />

correct but<br />

mundane No<br />

attempt at<br />

deliberate choice<br />

Some awkward<br />

constructions. Man<br />

y similar patterns<br />

and beginnings<br />

<strong>Lim</strong>ited control of<br />

conventions;<br />

frequent errors do<br />

not interfere with<br />

understanding<br />

Purpose and main<br />

idea may be<br />

unclear and<br />

cluttered by<br />

irrelevant detail<br />

Lack of structure;<br />

disorganized and<br />

hard to follow<br />

Missing or weak<br />

intro and conclusion<br />

Writing tends to be<br />

flat or stiff<br />

Little or no hint of<br />

writer behind words<br />

Monotonous, often<br />

repetitious,<br />

sometimes<br />

inappropriate<br />

Often choppy<br />

Monotonous<br />

sentence<br />

patterns. Frequent<br />

run-on sentences<br />

Frequent significant<br />

errors may impede<br />

readability<br />

Lacks central idea;<br />

development is<br />

minimal or<br />

non-existent<br />

Lack of coherence;<br />

confusing<br />

No identifiable<br />

introduction or<br />

conclusion<br />

Writing is lifeless<br />

No hint of the writer<br />

<strong>Lim</strong>ited range of<br />

words<br />

Some vocabulary<br />

misused<br />

Difficult to follow or<br />

read<br />

aloud Disjointed,<br />

confusing, rambling<br />

Numerous errors<br />

distract the reader<br />

and make the text<br />

difficult to read


After viewing<br />

Can you find any similarities between Billy and Jess? For example, what they<br />

like, their best friend’s sex orientation, their personalities, ending of the<br />

story…etc.<br />

E.g.<br />

Billy Elliot Jess Bhamra<br />

Loves dancing but considered to<br />

be a girl’s interest<br />

Loves playing football but considered to be<br />

a boy’s interest<br />

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Work in groups of 4. Two of you are reporters. One of you is Billy,<br />

the other is Jess. Billy and Jess are on a TV show being interviewed by the two<br />

reporters. <strong>The</strong> two reporters should prepare a list of questions to ask Billy / Jess,<br />

e.g. about their families, their paths to success, his girlfriend / her boyfriend,<br />

their best friend etc. You will act out the interview afterwards.<br />

Reporters’ questions:<br />

Ask Billy:<br />

1._______________________________________________________<br />

2._______________________________________________________<br />

3._______________________________________________________<br />

4._______________________________________________________<br />

5._______________________________________________________<br />

Ask Jess:<br />

1.________________________________________________________<br />

2.________________________________________________________<br />

3.________________________________________________________<br />

4.________________________________________________________<br />

5.________________________________________________________<br />

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Billy’s answers:<br />

1._______________________________________________________<br />

2._______________________________________________________<br />

3._______________________________________________________<br />

4._______________________________________________________<br />

5._______________________________________________________<br />

Jess’s answers:<br />

1._______________________________________________________<br />

2._______________________________________________________<br />

3._______________________________________________________<br />

4._______________________________________________________<br />

5._______________________________________________________<br />

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Criteria Poor<br />

Pronunciation<br />

and delivery<br />

Communication<br />

strategies<br />

Language and<br />

organisation<br />

Interview Rubric<br />

1<br />

-Speech halting,<br />

soft, nervous<br />

-Inattentive,<br />

unresponsive<br />

-No use of<br />

feedback or<br />

others’ ideas<br />

-Imprecise,<br />

confusing wording<br />

-Fails to clarify<br />

when needed<br />

Content -<strong>Lim</strong>ited ideas<br />

expressed<br />

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Fair<br />

3<br />

-Steady, fluent<br />

speech, may not be<br />

assertive<br />

-Fairly attentive, some<br />

eye contact<br />

-Acknowledges<br />

others’ ideas and<br />

feedback occasionally<br />

-Average word choice<br />

-Corrects and clarifies<br />

when needed<br />

-Ideas stated fairly<br />

clearly<br />

Excellent<br />

5<br />

-Fluent, steady<br />

speech, assertive<br />

-Very attentive, good<br />

eye contact<br />

-Responds to others<br />

and feedback<br />

promptly<br />

-Works to establish<br />

rapport<br />

-A range of good<br />

words chosen<br />

-Effectively<br />

rephrases when<br />

needed for clarity<br />

-Ideas expressed<br />

affirmatively


Listening<br />

Generic Skills<br />

Learning <strong>English</strong> through Popular Culture<br />

1. listening to video clips<br />

2. listening to peer’s<br />

performance<br />

3. listening to films excerpts<br />

4. peer performance<br />

1. Right attitude in ideas<br />

sharing<br />

2. Analytical ability<br />

3. Creative thinking<br />

4. Critical thinking<br />

5. Problem solving ability<br />

6. Skills in studying<br />

7. Evaluating and assessing<br />

abilities<br />

8. Communication skills<br />

Reading / Viewing<br />

1. Reading photos<br />

2. Reading comic strips<br />

3. Watching the video clips of TV<br />

commercials<br />

4. Watching movie clips<br />

Photos, comic<br />

strips, TV<br />

commercials,<br />

films<br />

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Speaking<br />

Writing<br />

1. Making predictions<br />

2. Sharing opinions<br />

3. Reporting<br />

4. Role playing a dialogue<br />

5. Interviewing film characters<br />

1. photo captions<br />

2. photo essays<br />

3. responses<br />

Responding<br />

1. Sharing what they<br />

think<br />

2. Presenting ideas<br />

3. Reporting<br />

discussions<br />

4. Having written<br />

responses to<br />

photos, comic<br />

strips, TV<br />

commercials and<br />

films<br />

5. Giving feedback to<br />

their peers<br />

4. slogans and commercials<br />

5. dialogues<br />

6. interview questions

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