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Fiction Writing Summer Camp 2021

​Young writers aged 11 to 13 joined us for an online Fiction Writing Camp from 26th - 29th July 2021. Imaginations soared to inventive worlds ranging from an infamous art robbery, a purple dragon who loves marshmallows, the recollections of ants, a poisoned hairbrush, some monster hunting, and crime. Each writer delved into the lives of memorable characters and twisting and turning plots.

​Young writers aged 11 to 13 joined us for an online Fiction Writing Camp from 26th - 29th July 2021.

Imaginations soared to inventive worlds ranging from an infamous art robbery, a purple dragon who loves marshmallows, the recollections of ants, a poisoned hairbrush, some monster hunting, and crime. Each writer delved into the lives of memorable characters and twisting and turning plots.

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<strong>Fiction</strong> <strong>Writing</strong> <strong>Summer</strong> <strong>Camp</strong><br />

JULY <strong>2021</strong>


Contents<br />

SOPHIE B.<br />

page 5<br />

ADAM C.<br />

page 9<br />

KEQIAO C.<br />

page 15<br />

ALEX C.<br />

page 19<br />

PHOEBE C.<br />

page 23<br />

ALANNA C.<br />

SOPHIE D.<br />

page 27<br />

page 33<br />

SARA K.<br />

page 37<br />

DAVID L.<br />

page 47<br />

GRACE H.<br />

CONOR S.<br />

page 53<br />

page 57


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SOPHIE B.<br />

5


The car pulled into a very strange parking lot. A lot of plants had turned into piles of<br />

mush. There was a lot of stone everywhere and rusty statues. Clearly, her aun wasn’t much<br />

of a gardening person.<br />

Kanina was being sent to her aunt’s house for the rest of the summer. It didn’t look<br />

like it was going to be much fun.<br />

Kanina knocked on the door. A woman in a black dress answered the door.<br />

“Hi, are you my aunt Dina?” Kanina asked.<br />

“Miss Dina isn’t here right now, I suppose you’re the niece?”<br />

“Yep, Kanina Clanine,” Kanina stuck her hand out.<br />

The woman briskly brushed Kanina’s hand away, “Welcome. I’m Mrs. Draeger, the<br />

maid.”<br />

Kanina was surprised. Her aunt had a maid? Was she rich? If she was rich, why the<br />

ugly garden?<br />

Let me know you to your room,” Mrs. Draeger said.<br />

Kanina walked into the house. It was kind of dark with not a lot of windows. This place<br />

had a weird feeling about it.<br />

They went up an elevator to her room. The door of her room was black and grey.<br />

“Altight, this is your room, goodbye now,” Mrs. Draeger left.<br />

Kanina looked around the room. There was a bed, an empty desk and a very dusty<br />

bookshelf.<br />

Kanina put her bag down and picked up one of the books. It had a blank cover with<br />

black paint all over it. Did her aunt just like painting things black?<br />

Kanina opened the book. A bunch of dust flew into the air. Clearly nobody had<br />

touched this book for ages.<br />

One of Kanina’s favoruite things about books was running her hands along the pages.<br />

It always felt like she was feeling the magic of the story. She ran her fingers along the pages<br />

of the book. It felt old and crinkly.<br />

Then, the words disappeared from the page.<br />

The book lit up suddently and shout out of Kanina’s hands.<br />

Kanina fell on the ground and shielded her eyes. The light stopped . Three figures<br />

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were leaning over her.<br />

“Wait, we’re alive? What’s going on?”<br />

“Let me ask a question: who are you and where are you from?” Kanina asked.<br />

“Well, I’m Arbie, that’s Joby, and that’s Jaylen,” figure three said. “And we’re from Anthgoni.”<br />

“Anthgoni?” Kanina asked.<br />

Arbie looked down at the book. “The-the land from the book.”<br />

“What? How can you possibly be from a book?” Kanina was confused.<br />

“Well, we, uh, got suckeed into some book forty-five years ago and now our job is to<br />

bring anyone who touches the book into Anthgoni,” said Jaylen.<br />

“What?” Why do I have to come with you?”<br />

“The Queen of Anthgoni, Dina Leeface, said that no one was every meant to touch this<br />

boik. Its information is sacred.<br />

Dina, Kanina thought. That her aunt’s name.<br />

“Okay then,” Kanina said<br />

***<br />

Mrs, Draeger walked up the stairs to call Kanina. She knocked on the door.<br />

“Kanina? Miss Kanina?”<br />

She opened the door and Kanina was gone. A black book was open on the ground.<br />

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THE TALE OF THE RADIOACTIVE PICKLE<br />

ADAM C.<br />

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It was just a normal day at the Parkland but the fact that they were mixing different Nuclear<br />

rods together meant some people were unsure of this. One man was so sure, he had his<br />

lunch near all of the Nuclear rods, but one innocent pickle slid out of his sandwich and into<br />

the vat of acid. Nobody thought anything of it until Wednesday, that was the day the Nuclear<br />

factory’s tank leaked and there was a pickle sized hole in the side. Nobody saw the pickle<br />

that made the pickle sized hole and caused Chernobyl II. People only caught a glimpse of<br />

the pickle before it shot itself into Orbit. So many people were confused how a pickle could<br />

survive a Nuclear radiation wave that extreme. For some weird reason the people of the<br />

town kept forgetting bits of what happened that day until no one could remember what a<br />

pickle was.<br />

It was a strange phenomenon but some people across the planet caught sight of that<br />

same pickle and the phenomenon continued but one man cannot forget and is spending<br />

his time tracking down the rogue pickle. Will he succeed or will his luck end and his fate be<br />

sealed. The pickle hasn’t noticed him yet. This is his story...<br />

Day 1<br />

Today is the first day of hunting for The Pickle. I am unbearably nervous because I have<br />

read in comics and seen in movies what Nuclear power can do to people, but never a pickle.<br />

I am curious to see what the pickle looks like. I have been my distance to ensure the pickle<br />

doesn’t catch sight of me. The Pickle has been gone now for 10 whole days and today is the<br />

first time I have decided to record my journey. Oh….I forgot to introduce myself; my name is<br />

Gideon O’Connor.<br />

Day 2<br />

The Pickle travels the speed of a normal car, approximately 85Kph but I finally got<br />

close enough to get a description. It was your average pickle, except for the fact that it was a<br />

bit brighter than when it had started out. Now it is yellow with green stripes but with a pink<br />

outline and it hovered all around the place. It is quite a mysterious and very eerie pickle.<br />

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Now, back to my pursuit of The Pickle.<br />

Day 3<br />

The Pickle is not flying as fast as it used to, I think it’s energy source is it’s moisture. I<br />

saw it today, picked up all the hoses in the neighbourhood and washed it down. The more<br />

hoses he used the faster he got and in the end nobody noticed. What kind or power does<br />

this Pickle have? Oh ya, I discovered it can manipulate minds within a twenty metre radius.<br />

I noticed this as I watched people bend to his will when he passed them on the street. Their<br />

limbs bent, their hands flew up in the air while their eyes darted about frantically, all the<br />

while it was as if The Pickle watched with a smile on his face. The commander of their bodies<br />

and dictator of their actions.<br />

Anyway….back to the current time. I want to report this to the Military but feel they<br />

won’t believe me. A radioactive Pickle who controls the human mind…how could they not<br />

believe me??<br />

It’s a hard job to follow The Pickle around and observe it’s every move but I feel it will<br />

pay off one day.<br />

Day 4<br />

The Pickle has gone back to the site of it’s creation with more pickles, I fear it wants to<br />

create an army of pickles to take over the world. When these pickles emerge from the plant<br />

they are different to the first pickle. They have a distinctive look of green and blue and their<br />

outline is a dim orange. I think the reason for this is because the acid has been left stagnant<br />

for days. These pickles seem to be under the control of the original Pickle and their powers<br />

are a lot weaker than their leaders.<br />

Day 5<br />

The Government must have taken notice of The Pickle and his army. They probably got<br />

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adioactivity readings on their machines. I mean, I’ve seen those machines in the movies so<br />

they probably have them in real life too…am I right? Uuugh…anyway, The Pickle has a decent<br />

army so it is time to run. I feel I have enough of this Pickle surveillance, it is making me<br />

tired and lately I’ve been feeling like this Pickle might just kill me.<br />

Day 6<br />

You know what; No! The Pickle can’t stop me, Gideon O’Connor. I come from a long<br />

line of determined conspiracy theorists which has allowed me to see the truth in the everyday<br />

slog. I’ve always had a keen eye for identifying mysterious objects and anomalies, sometimes<br />

it has gotten me into trouble, often it has made me the brunt of the joke but this time<br />

I am sure I am to be the saviour of humankind. This is the reason I can’t just walk away, even<br />

if my life hangs by a very thin thread. This is why I woke up this morning and realised I need<br />

to join the Government; this is the best option I feel. I don’t have the firepower or technology<br />

to stop The Pickle so I am hoping the Government will be able to supply the resources I<br />

need to complete my mission. Sadly, I have never used a gun before and this Pickle is Telekinetic<br />

so I might just be doomed but they realised my lack of skills before I could show them<br />

how qualified I was in other areas and unfortunately banned me from their offices forever<br />

more.<br />

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A DRAGON MARSHMALLOW LOVER<br />

KEQIAO C.<br />

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Boxes were flipped upside down, blankets were lying on the ground and Linda walked forward<br />

and back, looking worried.<br />

Linda was a marshmallow lover. Unlike other marshmallow lovers, Linda was a purple<br />

dragon. She lived in a cave. Linda inherited the cave and it was usually really clean and tidy.<br />

But this morning, Linda woke up to find her cave really messy as if someone had been<br />

looking for something.<br />

“My marshmallows!” cried Linda so loud that her neighbours woke up. “I need to get<br />

some more.”<br />

Linda flew to town but couldn’t find any marshmallows. Suddenly, she remembered<br />

that today was No Marshmallow Day. It was Linda’s least favourite day of the year.<br />

Linda’s favorite food was marshmallows and there were no marshmallows anywhere<br />

today. Linda needed to come up with a plan to find out who took all her precious marshmallows<br />

and to fill her tummy.<br />

Linda found a ‘How to make your own marshmallows’ book. She tried to make one<br />

but the marshmallow she made was so tiny. She decided to make more so she ended up<br />

making hundreds of them. Linda ate them all but still felt hungry. She got annoyed and<br />

started eating the book!<br />

Linda wanted to find out who took all the marshmallows so she asked the neighbours<br />

if they knew anything about the marshmallow thief.<br />

“Yesterday, you came up to my door while you were sleepwalking and took all my<br />

marshmallows!<br />

“I saw a dragon flying in the sky yesterday!”<br />

“It was you!!!”<br />

In the end, Linda realised that she ate all the marshmallows. She apologised to every<br />

dragon.<br />

Then, a great idea popped into her head.<br />

“How about we open a marshmallow factory? We could get marshmallows everyday<br />

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and even earn some money!” said Linda.<br />

Everyone agreed and started straight away. Their business went really well and never<br />

had to worry about getting not enough marshmallows.<br />

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THE NUARAMOSIAN HAIRBRUSH<br />

ALEX C.<br />

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Of all the places in the world I never thought I’d be here. Getting ready to go on stage!<br />

My name is Maria Ullagh and right now I’m doing my eyebrows. I’ve never thought<br />

much of my eyebrows. I was just tinting them when Elaine texted me. I scowled and<br />

snatched the phone.<br />

Leave me alone. I texted, then sighed.<br />

“Maria! You’re on in five,” called Desmond. I got up and quickly pulled on my leather<br />

heels. I eyed them with disgust. Oh well. No one will be looking at my feet, hopefully. I was<br />

about to redo my lipstick when Desmond burst in and hurried me out.<br />

I took a deep breath and then walked on stage. I prayed I wouldn’t trip on this ridiculously<br />

long brown cloak.<br />

“Ready?” whispered Calvin.<br />

“You bet,” I replied with a grin. The curtains lifted up and then there was complete<br />

silence. I felt glee spreading throughout my entire body. This is what I was meant to do. I<br />

searched for a familiar face, found her and then ignored the audience for the rest of the sho<br />

w.<br />

“Hey Maria, you were amazing out there, no stuttering.” Kelly said teasingly. I knew<br />

Kelly hadn’t intended for that to be mean, but it still stung a little. I haven’t stuttered since<br />

the eighth grade. Kelly started unpacking her bag, while I started packing mine. I told them<br />

that I didn’t mind sharing a dressing room, but it was a teeny bit annoying having to keep<br />

moving things.<br />

I was a mere metre from the door, when Kelly called out, “Oh Maria, wait is this your<br />

hairbru-”<br />

I turned around as Kelly fell to the ground with a thump.<br />

“Wwha-?” I began. Then I saw the green hairbrush in her hand. Suddenly, Kelly started<br />

twisting and shaking. She let out a pained noise. I screamed, and screamed. Desmond<br />

ran in.<br />

He gasped. “What happened?” Without taking his eyes off Kelly’s convulsing body.<br />

“I don’t know, I turned around and”-<br />

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Kelly had started to cackle. Desmond started yelling for help. He took out his phone.<br />

“I’ll call an ambulance, or the police, or-or anyone.”<br />

Forty five minutes later, Kelly was strapped to a hospital bed in the mental illness<br />

ward.<br />

They’d knocked her out when she’d started yelling, “ALL DEAD! ALL DEAD”! at the<br />

other patients.<br />

In a plastic bag on the bedside table, was the green hairbrush. I stared at it for quite<br />

some time, lost in thought. It was a nice hair brush. It had swirly green marble patterns. It<br />

looked expensive. I knew I’d never seen it before. Someone planted it there. The doctors<br />

said they had induced poison into the hairbrush. I think it was more than that though. It<br />

was no poison they’d ever seen before. Nuaramosia, I think they called it. Whatever it is, it<br />

caused severe mental damage.<br />

I just have no idea who would do this! Kelly was so kind-<br />

Wait.<br />

It was meant for me. It must have been. An odd feeling crept through my stomach<br />

and around my throat. Why would someone want to do this to me? I’ve practically never<br />

beef with someone. I felt sick. What if I’m in danger? What if-stop it Maria! I pushed away<br />

any selfish thoughts. I needed to focus on Kelly.<br />

I gazed at her, her red bob a mess and her bangs sticking up. Then, I looked at her<br />

face. She was so pale, my eyes went a little blurry. We weren’t best friends or anything, but<br />

I’ve known her since I was like fourteen.<br />

I decided then and there that whoever It was meant for, I would find out who did this<br />

and how to fix it. For Kelly. Just then my phone rang.<br />

“Hi mom, yeah. What? No, no she’s not dead! I’m FINE mom. Ugh, no I didn’t. Yeah.<br />

Yeah, okay listen I have another call on the line. YES,bye.” I declined my next call and then<br />

put the phone down.<br />

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THREE DAYS AND A KILLER<br />

PHOEBE C.<br />

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It was dark and Jeremy was sweating badly. He couldn’t run much further and the monster<br />

was closing in on him. He didn’t know how he had gone from top monster hunter to running<br />

from the most basic monster in the history of monster hunting.<br />

It was rule number one and the only rule of monster hunting; Don’t get eaten.<br />

Why didn’t he just become a doctor or a job that wouldn’t get him killed instantly if he<br />

wasn’t watching carefully enough. Unlike other jobs, it was never over, there was no end to<br />

his suffering.<br />

Once upon a time, he had wanted a family of his own but that was long before he took<br />

the job as a monster hunter. It stole any chance of having a family away from him because<br />

they would just be kidnapped, or at the worst, murdered.<br />

It happened to his friend Matt, who went against the rules and paid the price; they<br />

were kidnapped. The whole company was blackmailed and lost millions, he lost his job and<br />

his family were never found.<br />

Jeremy stopped himself from thinking about that and brought himself back to the current<br />

moment.<br />

He ducked under a tape barrier, changed direction and ran left down a sideroad and<br />

hid in a big rubbish bin. It stank of dead skunks, dipped in something so vile that he puked a<br />

little but forced it to stay down.<br />

He looked out. The monster was gone, for now.<br />

Then, he slowly exited the bin. Jeremy took out his phone and ordered a taxi. He<br />

looked up to see a figure.<br />

“Long time no see, eh Jer?”<br />

“I don’t know who you are,” but even as he said it he realised it was too late. He had<br />

managed to run from it for seven long years but it had finally caught up with him.<br />

He felt the stone cold blade against his neck and the steady flow of blood leaving him<br />

as he drifted in and out of consciousness until finally he fell to the ground.<br />

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Six Months Later<br />

How could I let my guard down like this? Look what I have gone and done now. Tied<br />

to a railway track, legs, mouth and hands all bound. I tried to get my pen knife out of my<br />

back pocket but the rope was too tight. Any second now a train would come speeding down<br />

these tracks and there was no one around to help me.<br />

Just great. I sighed as best I could with the rope around my mouth.<br />

I brought my arms around to the front of me with great difficulty, and managed to<br />

stand on the rope in a way that slowly ripped it.<br />

Great, now I just need to free my feet.<br />

I grabbed the knife out of my pocket and sliced the rope around both my feet and<br />

mouth. I jumped up and ran to the exit.<br />

I needed to get home. Mum and dad were going to kill me if I came home late again. I<br />

hastily looked at my watch.<br />

7:38pm. I needed to be home by 8pm.<br />

I snuck through the back window, but just as I got in, I saw my mum standing there,<br />

giving me her “serious” look.<br />

“Johanna, you can’t keep coming home this late, I can’t keep making excuses for you<br />

to your dad. Eventually you’ll have to tell him, I mean how many of your friends hide things<br />

like this?”<br />

“None,” I sighed dramatically. She said this nearly every time.<br />

I woke up to birds singing…. I wished. Dad shouted at me to come down for breakfast.<br />

Lovely. He can’t cook anything under any circumstance.. Of course, I’m not allowed to say<br />

that to him though. I forced myself down the stairs, still dressed from last night.<br />

“Morning,” I say politely, knowing that he won’t respond. We were never close. I went<br />

to the kitchen to grab some of my favourite Reese’s chocolate cups and grabbed my bag to<br />

head out the door.<br />

“Bye,” I say with little enthusiasm.<br />

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I never liked school. On my way there, I picked up my usual: a toasted white chocolate<br />

frappuccino and a chocolate chip cookie from starbucks. Yum. I checked my watch. 7:15am,<br />

okay, I had 15 minutes. Just enough time to do some investigating.<br />

“Damn it!” I yelp in frustration, how could I have been so wrong? Jeremy Ketterling<br />

was murdered by Amalia Bhodling, the Polish assassin, NOT Bernard Zenzigo which I had<br />

thought for months. I had done so much research on him, now it’s all wasted work! Ugh.<br />

Luckily, I knew a little about Ms Bhodling. She currently lives in Norway, not married,<br />

age 23. I had about seventy-two hours to catch a loose murderer who was targeting ten of<br />

the most powerful people in Europe.<br />

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THE CHICAGO ASSASIN<br />

ALANNA C.<br />

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There I was, walking down the cobbled path to one of the biggest meetings of my life. I took<br />

a big deep breath in and pulled open the door to Hotel La Grande. I strutted in with confidence.<br />

I was actually very nervous. Today was the day I met the top boss, the one who I<br />

have never met before but heard all about.<br />

Steven, my assistant greeted me and told me everyone else was in the conference<br />

room and they were waiting for me. I sat down on my seat in the conference room, and<br />

there was Frankie sitting at another end of the table. I was in shock.<br />

Frankie, no it couldn’t be.<br />

I grew more nervous now. He was not someone to mess with. If he was out to kill you,<br />

he would find a way. He was the so-called “top boss”. Frankie then started throwing me<br />

daggers.<br />

I thought, what’s this about? Have I done something?<br />

And then it came to me. A while back I was a member of Frankie’s gang. In fact when<br />

I joined, I thought it was an actual well respected business association, but it turned out to<br />

be a low life crime gang! I was on their radar, so I decided to run and set up my own crime<br />

gang. This meeting was supposed to be the two crime gangs joining together to form one,<br />

but as I have learned you can’t trust anyone in this business.<br />

Frankie stood up and I thought he was going to give a big speech. Instead, he whipped<br />

a dagger out of his pocket and aimed right for my head. I grabbed my chair, turned it around<br />

and used it as a shield.<br />

“Come on Steven, let’s get out of here!” I yelled.<br />

“I must have given you incorrect information ma’am, I’m sorry, I thought this would<br />

be legit,” he yelled back as we both ran out of the door at the speed of light with the other<br />

gang right on our tail.<br />

“Steven, rule number one: don’t trust anyone in this business. Now come on, also you<br />

don’t have to call me ma’am, Velma is fine,” I shouted back to him but then I lowered my<br />

voice and hissed, “We need to find an alleyway to hide in.”<br />

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When we had run out the door of Hotel La Grande, we started running past all these<br />

expensive shops and there were crowds of people everywhere. We had to say ‘excuse me’<br />

many times and burst through. The sky was turning darker now and there was a sense of<br />

mystery in the air.<br />

The other gang had all pulled out daggers, some were throwing them, and others were<br />

trying as hard as they could to catch up to us. We saw another giant crowd, and some of the<br />

people in there were wearing the same clothes as us. We waited in the middle of the crowd<br />

for the gang to catch up. They didn’t know where we went. As they were looking around at<br />

the people in the crowd, we seized our chance and bolted away from the crowd into a dimly<br />

lit alleyway. The chase wasn’t over yet but at least we had some time to breathe.<br />

Ten minutes later, the gang still hadn’t found us, so Steven suggested we go to his little<br />

enclosed cottage in Foggy Woods. I remembered going there with my parents on walks and<br />

it was always peaceful and tranquil.<br />

So, we set off for Foggy Woods hoping no one would follow us there. When we<br />

reached the cottage, Steven and I stepped inside and I saw technology and gadgets galore.<br />

“Wow Steven, I had no idea you used this place as a bunker!” I exclaimed.<br />

“Yeah, pretty impressive huh, I sometimes use it to track people down,” he replied.<br />

“Can you use it to see where Frankie and his gang are?” I asked.<br />

“Oh yes, good idea, emmm, no sign of them near we are all good,” he said.<br />

We spent about two days there just to be sure we were safe but on the third day I<br />

heard Steven on the telephone talking to someone strange.<br />

“Yes, I’ve got her, she’s still here,” he whispered. I knew he was talking about me but<br />

who was he talking to?<br />

“Steven,” I called. I heard a muffled voice coming from the other end of the telephone<br />

but couldn’t make out who it was or what they said.<br />

“I have to go, she’s calling me but I’m ready for tonight,” Steven hissed down the telephone.<br />

“Steven,” I called again, “Who were you talking to?”<br />

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“Oh, it’s a surprise, yes a surprise. You have been working so hard lately I thought I<br />

could do something nice for you,” he said with a hint of unsureness in his voice.<br />

“Alright,” I replied but, in my head, I knew he was up to something that was not normal.<br />

I am going to have to keep a close eye on him.<br />

Later that night, I heard a banging noise on the door. At first, I just thought it was the<br />

wind banging against it but then it grew louder. I thought no one knew about this place except<br />

us, right?<br />

Steven ran to the door and opened it and when he did, I heard a rough voice say, “We<br />

have the goods here, take em, now where is she?” he growled.<br />

The voice sounded like Tyler, Frankie’s right hand man. I started to slowly fill with fear.<br />

“Come out Velma,” Steven chuckled. I walked out slowly to see Frankie and many<br />

more members of his gang than I remember. Steven was holding a duffel bag full of money.<br />

“Steven, how could you!” I exclaimed.<br />

“Sorry a guy’s gotta do what a guy’s gotta do to make money, your job just doesn’t pay<br />

as much as it used to and as you say, you can’t trust anyone in this business,” he said as he<br />

grinned from ear to ear.<br />

“Unbelievable, I bet your so happy with yourself,” I shouted. Great, how am I going to<br />

get out of this one? I thought to myself, but then I got a bash on the head from behind and<br />

everything went cold.<br />

The next thing I remember was waking up in some blank room. The walls were white<br />

and there were no windows, only a single door. I was tied up, sitting in a chair. Frankie and<br />

Tyler walked in.<br />

“Why have you not killed me already,” I screamed.<br />

“Oh, my dear Velma, I want to see you suffer first, any last words?” Frankie said.<br />

Meanwhile, I saw Tyler’s eyes gleaming behind him, he wanted me dead too.<br />

“Yes actually, Frankie, back when I was in your gang, I found out who stole the money<br />

from that bank heist we supposedly lost the money from,” I said in a cool and calm voice.<br />

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him.<br />

“Why didn’t you tell me then, I bet it was you!” he shouted, the anger rising inside of<br />

“I went on that mission with Tyler, he took the money for himself. I saw him, he said if<br />

I told anyone he would kill me, so I had to leave,” I explained.<br />

Tyler’s face had a look of worry on it. Frankie’s expression changed as darkness descended<br />

on the room. He slowly turned his head around to face Tyler. He had a menacing<br />

glare in his eyes, one which I had never seen before.<br />

“Explain!” Frankie boomed his hands curling into fists.<br />

“No not at all sir, she is lying,” Tyler whimpered.<br />

“Think about it, you’re an intelligent man. He was the one who told you we lost the<br />

money and the next day he pulled up to the meeting in a brand-new car,” I said as a grin<br />

started slowly creeping up my face.<br />

Frankie pondered for a moment then he roared, “Tyler it was you,” as he pulled out<br />

his dagger and stabbed Tyler to death.<br />

“Now back to you Velma,” he said.<br />

“I have a proposal,” I said in a calm voice, “What if our gangs do actually join? You get<br />

more people and I’ll make them work for you, plus you get me back, I’d say that’s a win for<br />

you.”<br />

“Hmmm, I never thought of actually joining together but this changes things a little,”<br />

he pondered for a while. “Alright deal.”<br />

“Now, can you please untie me?” I declared. As he did, I started cooking up my next<br />

plan of action.<br />

He reached his hand out for me to shake it. I shook it and smiled.<br />

I started working for Frankie again, doing a few little missions, nothing much. I had to<br />

gain his trust back. About a week later a police car had pulled up to our gang’s headquarters.<br />

I heard a huge “BANG” as they broke down the door. (They made it look easy and I’d<br />

say it was because that door was very rusted and super old.)<br />

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“Put your hands up Frankie, it’s over, you can’t hide from us anymore, we’ve finally<br />

caught you,” shouted a large, burly policeman. Frankie came walking out ever so slowly.<br />

At first, he thought it was a joke but when he saw the look on the policemen’s faces,<br />

for the first time, I saw a hint of fear inside of him. He put his hands up and screamed,<br />

“Which one of you traitors did this.”<br />

I stepped forward with a big, cheesy smile and said, “Oh, it was me.”<br />

“Missy you’re coming with us too,” said another tall and thin policeman. As he grabbed<br />

my hands behind my back.<br />

“But I turned him in, and I wasn’t really part of his gang. I pretended to join it so I could<br />

inform you about his movement officer,” I said with the most innocent look I could put on.<br />

“Fair enough, you’re free to go ma’am, thank you for all your help, now come on Frankie,<br />

you’re coming with us,” boomed the large, burly policeman.<br />

“Wait!” I screamed, “What about the other gang members and Steven?”<br />

“Don’t worry ma’am, we have it all under control,” replied the tall, thin policeman.<br />

Frankie was dragged off into the police car never to be seen again.<br />

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SOPHIE D.<br />

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The dim lights above the dining table show the tiredness in my face, according to mum.<br />

“All the flying and performing is going to be the death of you,” she says as she boils<br />

the kettle. I look around at my childhood home and take in the familiarity of it.<br />

The Christmas decorations are put up all around the house. Another year and I think<br />

they’ll finally show their age or just wither away at this point.<br />

“Mum, could I buy some decorations? These are…” she turns around,<br />

“I’m not taking your money Theo, but thank you,” she turns back and grabs the mugs<br />

off the table.<br />

She sits and blows on her tea, “I want you to explain to me what is really happening,”<br />

she says.<br />

“What are you talking about?” I know damn well what she’s talking about but I don’t<br />

want to talk about it.<br />

“What the tabloids are saying about you and Lily?” When I don’t say anything she<br />

speaks again. ‘Usually when you walk through that door, you talk endlessly about what you<br />

and Lily have gotten up to. You haven’t mentioned her since you got home, it’s odd.”<br />

I scowl, “it’s not odd.”<br />

“It’s odd.’ She remarks. She sips her tea, “Theo, how do you feel about her? You look<br />

at her like she is your last salvation but the minute I question you about your feelings towards<br />

her you change the subject.”<br />

I know how I feel about her but knowing it and saying it are two completely different<br />

things.<br />

I pause and recollect my thoughts.<br />

“I don’t know she…she just has all these little things about her that when added all<br />

together make her…her. For example, when we are talking and when a conversation comes<br />

up she is really passionate about, she starts ranting and I have to stop so she can take a<br />

breath, or when she buys new books she writes her thoughts in the margins, I always tell<br />

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her it annoys me but in reality it doesn’t. She also does this thing that when I just started<br />

writing a new song she writes her favourite lyrics on her phone.”<br />

I lean my head back and laugh.<br />

I realised that this is what I found interesting about people. People’s little quirks that<br />

they keep hidden away from the world and only let a handful of people see. I have managed<br />

to figure out all of hers and she is one of the most interesting people I have ever met.<br />

“She deserves better than me. I can’t give her the relationship she deserves,” I mumble.<br />

My mum simply observes me quietly and takes a sip of her tea.<br />

“Lily deserves someone who will love every bit of her no matter what and you do.”<br />

I look up and she gives me that comforting smile only a mother could give.<br />

“I promise that will be enough.”<br />

She leans back in her chair, finishing off her tea as I soak in her words. Last Christmas<br />

softly plays in the background, filling up the silence between us.<br />

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THE PERSISTENCE OF MYSTERY<br />

SARA K.<br />

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1989, HOLLAND<br />

A little girl sits by eternity’s gate.<br />

Of course, she is not literally sitting by eternity’s gate. She is sitting on a bench in the<br />

Kröller-Müller Museum, in front of Vincent Van Gogh’s painting of eternity’s gate.<br />

Though to her it is the same thing.<br />

Her father is across the room, looking at other paintings, and talking to a kindly woman<br />

who keeps pointing at different sculptures.<br />

Both the girl and her father feel at home here, surrounded by strokes of paintbrushes,<br />

oils on canvas, in the midst of a foreign city, where everyone speaks a different language.<br />

In the midst of the unknown.<br />

2003, PARIS<br />

Evie Blanchet sits in the Louvre Museum trying to be a good intern, but instead admires<br />

works of art, when she gets a text message. This isn’t unusual, Evie guesses it’s Luke,<br />

or Aanya, or one of her other college friends. But she doesn’t recognise the number. She<br />

clicks on it anyway.<br />

Hello, Evie. We know you love art, remember the Isabella Stewart Gardner Museum<br />

you went to with Theodore?<br />

It takes Evie a moment to realise that ‘Theodore’ is referring to her father. She is<br />

slightly unnerved by the message but keeps reading.<br />

We know you remember. And only two months after the paintings were stolen. Thirteen<br />

priceless pieces, but of course you already know that. You take a course in art history<br />

and criminology, don’t you? Your father would be proud. He is proud, very proud. But do<br />

you know what he would regret? His little girl not knowing the truth about him.<br />

Evie deletes the number.<br />

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She has just put her phone back in the pocket of her jeans when it buzzes again.<br />

That won’t work, miss Blanchet.<br />

The second she blocks the number she gets a string of texts, all links and screenshots<br />

of articles relating to the Gardner Museum heist. She leans against the museum wall, suddenly<br />

breathless.<br />

Meet me outside the louvre at 12pm tomorrow. Don’t be late, miss Blanchet<br />

We’re counting on you<br />

Evie stares at the screen for several minutes before sending a one-word reply, why?<br />

She is not expecting the answer she gets.<br />

I think you already know<br />

2003, PARIS<br />

Evie Blanchet doesn’t sleep well that night. She reminds herself that they were nothing<br />

but text messages, there won’t be anyone at the Louvre tomorrow at 12pm, even if<br />

there will be, she wont be there and she’ll never know.<br />

She finds it particularly difficult to admit to herself that part of her wonders what this<br />

means.<br />

So, she doesn’t.<br />

She goes on pretending she couldn’t care less. Her father was an art dealer, many<br />

would know his name, his daughter, the passion they both share.<br />

After pointless hours of staring at the dark ceiling, she opens her laptop. The faint<br />

glow of the screen reflects off her mirror, making the room brighter, but eerier. She googles<br />

‘’Isabella Gardner heist’’ and clicks on a Wikipedia article. She reads and soon opens thirteen<br />

new tabs, one for each piece stolen. She reads about the artists, the sculptors, the history<br />

and how they could possibly be related. She reads and she reads until her laptop screen<br />

grows dimmer and Paris grows brighter. She checks her phone, 8:37am, just enough time to<br />

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pack up and hand in her hotel room keys and catch the train to the airport, though her flight<br />

isn’t until 4 o’clock.<br />

She leaves, day going ahead as planned. She eats breakfast, packs, says goodbye to<br />

the hotel receptionist and gets on a train, music blasting through her headphones. She lowers<br />

the volume and closes her eyes, leaning back against her seat. Before she realises it, she<br />

has fallen asleep.<br />

The train jerking to a stop is what wakes Evie. She asks the old woman sitting next to<br />

her what station she is at, stumbling over her French phrases. The most she understands<br />

from her reply is that she is at Châtelet station, though she doesn’t know where that is. She<br />

thanks the woman and looks up her location. She isn’t far from the Louvre. She checks her<br />

watch. Almost quarter to twelve. She wants to get off at the next station. She tells herself<br />

she won’t.<br />

She does anyway.<br />

The moment she arrives, her phone buzzes.<br />

Early, as usual, miss Blanchet<br />

She is only five minutes ahead of time.<br />

Where are you? She types, though she really wants to ask, Who are you?<br />

She gets no reply. She pockets her phone when a dark-haired man walks up to her.<br />

‘’Sorry, this sounds really strange but I was asked to meet with someone here.’’ He<br />

doesn’t go on.<br />

Evie replies, ‘’I’m also meeting up with someone here’’<br />

‘’The name Blanchet mean anything to you?’’<br />

Evie stares back at him.<br />

‘’My last name…why?’’<br />

The man looks appalled. He shakes her hand.<br />

‘’Liam Blanchet. Weird, I know.’’<br />

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‘’Evie,’’ she says, still looking at him in slight shock.<br />

He takes his phone from his pocket.<br />

‘’Five past, I think they stood me up,’’ he sighs. ‘’I got a bunch of weird texts yesterday,<br />

was told to be here for 12pm.’’<br />

Evie takes out her own phone and shows the screen to Liam.<br />

‘’Anything like this?’’<br />

He looks puzzled.<br />

‘’I’ve- I’ve got the same messages,’’ he shows her his screen, the messages identical<br />

apart from the use of ‘’Mr Blanchet’’<br />

‘’What the hell?’’ Evie starts to pace. Liam sits down on one of the benches.<br />

After muttering to herself in disbelief for a few minutes, Evie sits down next to him.<br />

She reads a couple missed texts from her friends, but barely processes what they say.<br />

When it gets to half, she gets up.<br />

‘’I should probably get going.’’ she half smiles at Liam, again stating how creepy it was<br />

that they received the same messages and that the sender didn’t show up.<br />

Liam gets up, too.<br />

They part, knowing they’ll probably never see each other again. Maybe sometime in<br />

the middle of the night, Evie will think about the time she met a young man with the same<br />

last name as her behind the Louvre Museum. Maybe she won’t.<br />

But the future is always unpredictable.<br />

2003, SOMEWHERE ABOVE THE ALTANTIC OCEAN<br />

Evie’s flight is normal, just like the one she took to France. The two girls sitting next to<br />

her talk in hushed tones, because they dot want to be heard, or because they don’t want to<br />

disturb her. Though Evie thinks it naïve of herself, she likes to think the latter is true.<br />

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Everything is fine until a man over the intercom says they only have an hour left of flight. A<br />

man sitting a few rows in front of her gets up. She has no interest in the man until he stops<br />

in beside her chair.<br />

‘’Evie Blanchet?’’ He stares at her in shock.<br />

‘’And you are?’’<br />

‘’We met this afternoon.’’<br />

Realisation dawns on Evie as she remembers the man named Liam from the Louvre<br />

Museum.<br />

She undoes her seat belt and gets up. She realises they are almost the same height.<br />

‘’This can’t be happening.’’<br />

She chuckles bitterly.<br />

‘’I can’t believe it.’’<br />

‘’I guess it must be fate.’’<br />

‘’I don’t believe in things like fate,’’ she says.<br />

‘’Then what do you believe in?’’<br />

Evie doesn’t reply.<br />

The man on the intercom comes on again, warning passengers of turbulence, but Evie<br />

is already shaken. Liam’s phone buzzes.<br />

He shows Evie the text. I see you’ve met Miss Blanchet; it reads.<br />

He asks if she’s received something similar.<br />

‘’Aren’t you supposed to have airplane mode turned on?’’<br />

He shrugs and asks her to check.<br />

She turns on her phone and reads the message without unlocking it.<br />

I see you’ve met Mr Blanchet<br />

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Evie’s hand trembles. She and Liam lock eyes.<br />

‘’I don’t think this is normal,’’ he says.<br />

They both receive another message, at the exact same time.<br />

Now that you’ve met your partner, you’re ready to play.<br />

2003, BOSTON<br />

Evie’s friends are waiting for her at the airport. They ask her about Paris, gushing over<br />

the sights she must have seen. Evie nods along and smiles, but remains distracted by the<br />

man named Liam Blanchet. He gave her his number and told her to send him screenshots if<br />

the strange number messages her again. She hasn’t gotten any new messages, but the most<br />

recent one burns in her mind.<br />

Now that you’ve met your partner, you’re ready to play<br />

She doesn’t understand. What game? Is Liam her partner? And how are the random<br />

texts connected to the Gardner heist?<br />

She reads more articles about art theft when her friends drive her home. Luke asks if<br />

she wants to go to the bar with them, she replies that she’s jetlagged. She knows she should<br />

probably go with them, if she doesn’t, she’ll just spend the evening reading about art robbery<br />

and going through the anonymous text messages. She politely refuses anyway.<br />

Her small apartment is silent apart from the sound of her keyboard. She reads about<br />

art theft.<br />

In 1994, Edvard Munch’s ‘’The Scream’’ was stolen. Recovered three months later.<br />

The Mona Lisa was stolen in 1911. Found in Italy.<br />

Portrait of a lady.<br />

Portrait of Adele Bloc-Bauer I.<br />

The Mute Woman.<br />

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But what Evie can’t grasp is why would someone steal thirteen seemingly random<br />

works of art from a museum that houses so many priceless works. If you’re going to rob an<br />

art museum, why not take the all the most valuable pieces? It’s the randomness and lack<br />

of logic that bothers Evie. She’s spent her whole life bound by logic and reason. She just<br />

can’t understand.<br />

Her eyes are sore from string at her screen for so long. But she keeps reading.<br />

She won’t stop until she figures out what makes these thieves tick.<br />

2003, BOSTON<br />

Two weeks, and no news from the sender or Liam.<br />

Evie’s spent most of her summer so far reading about theft. She went to the library a<br />

few day ago to borrow a couple books about thieves and their motivations. She read most<br />

of them in one night.<br />

She is at a café downtown, her favourite place to spend a summer afternoon, when<br />

her phone rings. She half hopes it is the stranger from Paris. There is no caller ID, and before<br />

she thinks better of it, she accepts.<br />

‘’Is this Evie Blanchet?’’<br />

It’s Liam, the man from behind the Louvre.<br />

‘’Yes?’’<br />

‘’Something’s happened.’’ He sounds tired and terrified.<br />

‘’Liam? Hello,’’ she sounds frantic, the other side of the phone is static.<br />

The call ends, and she has two new text messages.<br />

The first one is from her friend Luke, asking her if she wants to visit him in Canada<br />

before the summer ends.<br />

The other is from Liam, a question.<br />

How far away are you from New York?<br />

2003, HALFWAY TO NEW YORK<br />

When Evie was ten, she read her first Agatha Christie novel, Murder on the Orient<br />

Express. After that, she promised herself she would never travel by train.<br />

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And now here she is on her way to New York, spending what little time and money she<br />

has to meet someone who is almost a stranger.<br />

A perfect trip for the summer.<br />

She tries calling Liam back, the first few times leading to his voicemail, the times after<br />

telling her his number isn’t in service.<br />

She texts him, looks for his social media, but Liam Blanchet is a popular name. thousands<br />

of results.<br />

The only thing she can do is wait.<br />

2003, NEW YORK CITY<br />

Liam waits for her at the station. He looks as if he hasn’t slept since she saw him last.<br />

Without saying anything, he leads her back to an apartment block not unlike her own. She<br />

asks what happened, why she has to be in New York, but he doesn’t reply. He just opens the<br />

apartment door for her as a way of explanation.<br />

Evie just stares at the place in shock.<br />

Everything is in ruins. The couch is torn, the fridge hanging open, spilled water on the<br />

rug, dirt, ripped wallpaper, objects turned over, drawers looted.<br />

On the kitchen island sits Liam’s phone, the screen shattered beyond repair. There are<br />

two barely readable texts on the screen.<br />

Games are played to win, Mr Blanchet<br />

And underneath:<br />

We thought Theodore had taught you better<br />

The moment Evie reads the messages, her own phone buzzes.<br />

Ready for round two, Miss Blanchet?<br />

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FRANKIE’S ODYSSEY<br />

DAVID L.<br />

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Frankie slammed his foot on the doors and they swung open. A gush of cold November<br />

wind ran through the lobby of the Langham Hotel, Chicago. He marched up the stairs and<br />

met his sidekicks.<br />

“Are they here?” He asked.<br />

“Yup,” replied the first sidekick.<br />

“You ready?” asked the second.<br />

“Of course,” muttered Frankie as he made his way to the hall. As he came across a<br />

cleaning lady, he briefly asked her: “S’cuse me, ma’am. But where would I find the conference<br />

room?”<br />

“Up three floors and to the right.”<br />

“Thank you,” Frankie tipped the lady a 20$ bill and kept moving down the hall. Frankie<br />

was loaded from owning the biggest cartel in Southern Chicago. Him and his boys got to the<br />

door briefly after and his sidekicks put on ski masks.<br />

Frank was prepared to let his victims know who got ‘em. The second sidekick kicked<br />

down the locked door and the first pulled out a gun. They got to the business conference<br />

and Frankie began to speak:<br />

“Velma Wattford! This is for trying to abandon MY BUSINESS!!”<br />

“Why would I want to your sad business. You should be happy I didn’t leave sooner,”<br />

Velma said smuggle.<br />

“Enough!” barked Frankie, “You know what? I wanna do this myself!” Frankie snatched<br />

the gun from the first sidekick…<br />

“Come on. Kill me then!” Shouted Velma.<br />

“Y’know what? I got a special weapon just for you,” Frankie, almost deranged by hatred,<br />

slowly pulled out a dagger, “We ruled Chicago as partners Velma, you really gonna<br />

throw that away so you can play dress up gangsters with your fake friends?” Frankie was<br />

shouting at the top of his lungs, “I’m more powerful now than I ever was with you! You left<br />

me with nothing and even now I still have a bigger cartel than you!” barked Frankie.<br />

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“Well, actually she’s much stronger in the north than you and her overall numbers are<br />

much better…” mumbled the first sidekick.<br />

“Shut your mouth!” said Frankie as he spun back and slashed the first sidekick across<br />

the face. Then Frankie turned back to Velma, “Next please,” he giggle as he threw the<br />

bloody dagger at Velma.<br />

Velma started to run but the knife cut through her elbow.<br />

“Yaow!” screamed Velma.<br />

Her friend got up, “I have your Bentley outside Velm,” he said.<br />

“Thanks Stephen,” flinched Velma.<br />

Velma and Stephen raced down the stairs.<br />

“Get to the lift!” shouted Frankie.<br />

When they got to the car park, Frankie saw Velma and Stephen in the Bentley.<br />

“Goddamn, why does everything always have to work out so damn well for her?!”<br />

shouted Frankie as he ran up to his car, “No. 2 your now No. 1”.<br />

“Hell yea. Promotion baby!” said the sidekick.<br />

They got into the car and Frankie slammed on the accelerator. They drift around the<br />

corner and they keep moving down Ohio Street.<br />

“Em…Sir? Can we real quick stop by the airport? asked his sidekick, “I gotta pick my<br />

nana,”<br />

As Frankie gave him ‘the look’, he swiftly drifted around a corner. He started to hear<br />

police sirens.<br />

“It’s the Feds!” said Frankie’s sidekick.<br />

Frankie started to pull in.<br />

“Wait, what? I’ve never seen you give into a copper before.” Said the sidekick.<br />

“Well, we lost her.”<br />

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The police officer walked up to the window, “Sorry sir, but did you know you were going<br />

60 miles over the limit?” He asked.<br />

“Oh…em…yes…but…it was only because…my friend here…got a kidney stone,” said<br />

Frankie.<br />

“Oh…em, he doesn’t look like it.”<br />

Frankie punched his sidekick’s groin and he jumps up in pain.<br />

“YAOW!!”<br />

“Listen, what’s your name?” asked Frankie.<br />

“Thomas,” said the officer.<br />

“Oh, great! My name is also…that!” cheered Frankie, “You’d be doing my friend here…<br />

Edgar, a huge favour,” Frankie slipped Thomas a 50$ note and with his other hand he<br />

punched the sidekick again.<br />

“OUCH!” the sidekick screamed.<br />

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The next few days passed and Frankie’s sidekick’s nana had been staying with them and<br />

while Frankie was sitting on his chair enjoying his daily calzone his telephone rang.<br />

“Hello?” asked Frankie.<br />

“Hi, I’m Stephen and I have Velma Wattford’s location.” Stephen whispered.<br />

“WHAT?! You do?” said Frankie, “Where is she?”<br />

“What’s in it for me?” asked Stephen.<br />

“What do you want? Anything, anything at all for that information!” screamed Frankie.<br />

“75 THOUSAND DOLLARS!!!” laughed Stephen.<br />

“Ok, deal. Where is she?”<br />

“In a cabin on the west of the Ram Forest,” said Stephen.<br />

“I’ll be there in 2 hours,” said Frankie.<br />

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***<br />

“Does you nana really have to come?” whined Frankie 1 hour into the car ride.<br />

“Yes. She didn’t fly all the way over so she could never do anything with us,” answered<br />

the sidekick.<br />

“I’ve never even MET your nana,” scoffed Frankie.<br />

Once they got to the cabin, they ran inside.<br />

“Now I got you, Velma!” Frankie shouted. “No. 1, give Steve the dough.”<br />

“What?” shouted Velma, “You ratted me out?!?”<br />

“I’m sorry but he offered me 75,000 dollars. You understand, right Velm?” asked Stephen.<br />

“You don’t get to call me that!” screamed Velma.<br />

Suddenly Frankie pulled out a tommy gun. “Velma,” laughed Frankie, “See you in hell!”<br />

Frankie released fire and Velma ducked behind a couch. Glass shattered. Bricks snapped.<br />

Velma quickly pulled a revolver. She jumped up and shoots, hitting Frankie’s sidekick right in<br />

the head.<br />

She then jumped out a window and got in her car.<br />

“Damnit, she got away!”<br />

Suddenly the police broke through the door, “EVERYBODY DOWN!!” They shouted.<br />

Frankie jumped on the floor and looked, “Thomas?” he asked, “Is that you?”<br />

“What?” shouted Thomas, “You’re a criminal? I can’t believe I made you that friendship<br />

bracelet! Boys cuff him.”<br />

“No! Please, I’m innocent!” shouted Frankie, “It was all Velma Wattford!!”<br />

Thomas picked up Frankie’s sidekick’s bullet-laced body.<br />

“Looks like the kidney stone got the better of him,” Thomas said to himself.<br />

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THE STRANGER AT THE DOOR<br />

GRACE H.<br />

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It was Monday morning and the table was packed with sausages and a plate filled with eggs.<br />

My family sat down at the table. There was a loud banging on the door, and my dad got up<br />

to answer. The door opened.<br />

I could see a tall figure with a black coat and hat. Mum got up to peek out the door.<br />

My parents both jumped back as the person stepped in. Who was this stranger? This is your<br />

new child-minder; her name was Ms Eris. She removed her hat. Her hair was cut very short<br />

and was black; she had a long nose and two slits for eyes and a large crooked mouth. There<br />

was something unusual about her, she sort of looked pale blue. She sat down and we all<br />

started eating. That is, except for the weird woman. My brother had already inhaled his<br />

food, like he usually does.<br />

A minute or two later Ms Eris took out a small tub of what looked like slime. She said<br />

it was organic peanut butter. My brother and I both glanced at each other, our faces frozen<br />

with horror. She grabbed some toast and started to spread the so-called “peanut butter”. I<br />

noticed small bubbles appearing on the surface of the toast. A huge grin spread across her<br />

face as she handed a slice of toast to both of us.<br />

I took a tiny bite of this horrible thing. All of a sudden it felt as if my mouth was on<br />

fire. I raced to the tap to try and rinse my mouth out. Now I felt as if I had popping candy<br />

banging on my tongue. I hurried to the bathroom to try and spit it out but as I was climbing<br />

the stairs two steps at a time my mouth went cold. I could feel a million freezing ice cubes<br />

accompanied by brain freeze. When I reached the bathroom I spit out the slime or I mean<br />

“Peanut Butter”! After I puked like a thousand times I went back downstairs.<br />

My brother looked as pale as a ghost and I am sure I looked the same. My parents<br />

looked completely frozen. Actually as I took a closer look they were covered in a thin layer<br />

of ice. I was terrified! I pulled my brother away from the table and pushed him behind me<br />

as we both backed away from Ms Eris. She was some sort of Monster. I couldn’t think. I had<br />

to get out of here”. But the strange pale creature was blocking the front door. Ms Eris removed<br />

her coat and I couldn’t believe what I was seeing. My brain wasn’t working or I was<br />

in a dream. That was what I was hoping but unfortunately this was REAL!<br />

Ms Eris wasn’t a child-minder. She was a scaly backed lion/monster/human; she was<br />

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completely blue with a purple stripe on her shoulder. We had to trap her or kill her. That’s<br />

when I fell to the ground. Everything went black.<br />

I must have woken a few seconds later but this wasn’t my mind, I mean I had glimpses<br />

of my mind. I was in Ms Eris’s mind. I could see that she detested heat it made her skin<br />

crawl. I could feel her nerves jangling.<br />

There was evil in her brain, she could control the minds of children and use them as<br />

her slaves. I could see her, home; she lived in this underground world. I knew that I had to<br />

do something.<br />

I really focused; I used every ounce of concentration “Bang” I snapped out of Ms Eris’s<br />

mind. I ran into the living room and went over to the fireplace and started a fire.<br />

The plan was perfect. I then raced back into the hall and I asked my brother to help me<br />

push Ms Eris into the living room.<br />

The evil Eris didn’t know what we were doing but she wasn’t afraid to fight back. She<br />

almost bit off a few of my fingers. She scraped me, tearing with her claws across my face. It<br />

took real effort but we got her in the living room and pushed her towards the fire. She tried<br />

to run away a few times but we managed to keep her still. Next we shoved her into the fire<br />

within a millisecond she had turned to dust. My parents unfroze immediately. We ran over<br />

and hugged them. I was overjoyed to have them back.<br />

That night I wondered what if there were more monsters? What if there were other<br />

kids trapped in that underworld!! WHO WAS GOING TO HELP?<br />

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STATE OF HIVE MIND<br />

CONOR S.<br />

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In the rocky biomes of an unnamed planet, a carpet of blue, ant-like bodies descended from<br />

a plateau and advanced towards a distant fissure. Thousands of tiny mandibles sheared<br />

through the thin plant cover, feeding the separate parts of a single mind. The legion had lost<br />

too many soldiers, and it needed to gather itself.<br />

Must escape, get away.<br />

As the fissure drew near, hundreds of fresh ants emerged from the depths below, and<br />

blindly crawled towards the entity. As the new ants mingled with the entity’s, they turned<br />

blue. The entity could feel its mind expanding. A minute passed as the entity recovered its<br />

intelligence.<br />

But as its senses expanded, the entity detected something. Another entity. As the yellow<br />

carpet crawled towards the entity.<br />

In the mind of the yellow entity, the blue entity spoke.<br />

We were less. You are many. Go away.<br />

We are undertaking a great journey. We need more soldiers if we<br />

want to survive.<br />

Where are you headed?<br />

The yellow entity hissed.<br />

You’ll tell us out to another entity!<br />

Then how far are you travelling?<br />

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Two-thousand ant-meters.<br />

Why are you travelling?<br />

There are too many complexes. They are too dangerous.<br />

Complexes? What are- oh.<br />

The blue entity suddenly remembered. Complexes were gargantuan hordes of ants.<br />

They could outsmart any other entity, but mostly lurked at fissures, further increasing their<br />

size and thought power. The only thing that prevented them from constantly overpowering<br />

smaller entity’s was ironically their own intellect: they were too busy thinking to bother<br />

anyone else.<br />

The blue entity had been hunted by a complex. It had wandered too close to a gathering<br />

of them, and had interrupted their debate. When the blue entity was close enough to be<br />

in range of their thoughts, they had torn its mind apart. It would take a long time to recover<br />

its previous size.<br />

The amount of ants emerging from the fissure began to dwindle. The blue entity realised<br />

it was being selfish, and moved away from the fissure. It had enough soldiers to last a<br />

while.<br />

Thank you.<br />

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The last few hundred ants crawled out and joined the yellow entity. The fissure closed<br />

and the entities turned around, and headed off on their journeys.<br />

The planet consisted of three continental landmasses, with small seas in between. As<br />

it travelled, the entity pondered its strategy. If what the yellow entity said was true, it needed<br />

to find new lands to graze on.<br />

It only had two-thirds of its previous size, so the entity began to search for more fissures.<br />

As the entity travelled across short meadows, it found a smaller entity, a white entity,<br />

grazing. The other entity took one look at it, before it scuttled away. Weird.<br />

Eventually, the entity found another fissure, and this time, it was alone. But the fissure<br />

only lasted for a short while, before it closed again, and the entity continued on its journey.<br />

As the entity ascended another mountain slope, it found the corpse of a complex. Millions<br />

of ants lay dead, all of them a faded pink. But there were some ants that still clung on,<br />

and so they changed their colours, and the entity’s mind expanded.<br />

A faint memory was forming in the entity’s mind. It had a name. The entity figured<br />

that if it was patient, it would recall it. So it continued on.<br />

One hundred ant-meters later (one ant-meter was the maximum distance an ant<br />

could travel before dying), the entity had found another fissure. As the thousands of ants<br />

joined with the entity, it finally remembered. Its name was Xurivus. Xurivus wondered what<br />

other parts of its identity were missing, so it continued travelling.<br />

On the other side of the mountain, Xurivus’ could faintly sense something. Another<br />

entity.<br />

More<br />

It was the entity from earlier. The white entity.<br />

MORE<br />

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It was larger now.<br />

MORRRRE!!!<br />

The entity emerged from the undergrowth, and charged at Xurivus. White ants collided<br />

with blue, as the attacking ants fought fiercely with their mandibles. Xurivus was surprised,<br />

for very few entities actually attacked physically. But this shock didn’t last for long,<br />

because its ants were beginning to die.<br />

In terms of size, they were even. But terms of experience, Xurivus was superior.<br />

STOP<br />

The white ants froze.<br />

warning.<br />

Leave me alone, or be consumed. Choose one. This is your only<br />

The white entity was still, but then it laughed. The white entity crawled back as three<br />

tiny entities crawled out of the grass. Xurivus had been ambushed.<br />

Now the battlefield was a swirling carpet of green, black, orange and blue. The blue<br />

entity split into three smaller versions of itself, to attack each legion separately. But the blue<br />

entities were still larger than their opponents.<br />

DIE!<br />

DIE!<br />

DIE!<br />

The ants writhed, as the entities minds were scrambled. But its mental attack dazed<br />

the blue entity. The blue entity could do nothing as the white entity came back to the battlefield,<br />

and turned the scrambled entities to its side.<br />

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lue entity. The blue entity could do nothing as the white entity came back to the battlefield,<br />

and turned the scrambled entities to its side.<br />

Clever.<br />

The white entity made a sound that resembled a laugh.<br />

Believe me, I was only trying to turn those smaller entities. I<br />

don’t like killing entities my own size.<br />

So you’re a bully?<br />

though.<br />

Hmm, I guess I am. They had been following me for a long time,<br />

The white entity turned around, and headed off into the horizon. Eventually, the blue<br />

entity had the strength to continue on. It was smaller now, but that was easily fixed.<br />

But there was something that was bothering it. It felt like it had forgotten something,<br />

but the entity reasoned that it probably didn’t matter. The blue entity turned around, and<br />

headed back up the mountain.<br />

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