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7.<br />

Something about the waiters, their nervousness and doggedness,<br />

gives FLORENCE the giggles. She turns away and we follow her<br />

into the bedroom.<br />

8 INT. HOTEL SUITE. BEDROOM. DAY<br />

8<br />

She stands by the bed, trying to recover. From next door, EDWARD<br />

doing his best to sound authoritative.<br />

EDWARD (V.O.)<br />

You could push the window shut. Not<br />

all the way, no, more, that’s it.<br />

Thank you. Now try... Yes, yes... we<br />

both want the melon... and the thingy,<br />

the glazed cherry...<br />

9 INT. HOTEL SUITE, SITTING ROOM. DAY.<br />

9<br />

Minutes later. EDWARD and FLORENCE are at table, the two WAITERS<br />

serve from the trolley. The floorboards squeak loudly against<br />

the silence.<br />

EDWARD watches the WAITERS closely for any sign of mockery.<br />

Plates of melon are set down. The wine is poured for EDWARD to<br />

taste. He takes his time, samples it and frowns importantly,<br />

holds his glass to the light, takes a second sip.<br />

He pours.<br />

EDWARD<br />

Very good actually.<br />

WAITER TWO<br />

Thank you sir.<br />

CUT TO A minute later. The WAITERS stand back, napkins over<br />

their forearms, staring straight ahead, expressions<br />

impenetrable. The COUPLE are acutely conscious of them and avoid<br />

each other’s eye.<br />

EDWARD<br />

Are you er, are you going to stand<br />

there the whole time?

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