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Research Papers Simplified - Laramie County Community College

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This thesis statement is definitely an opinion because the reader can eit her<br />

agree or disagree with the thesis statement.<br />

Rule 2: Your thesis statement should be focused.<br />

Have you ever heard the expression, ―Don’t bite off more than you can<br />

chew‖ The same is true with essay writing: do not take on more than you can<br />

fully and adequately cover in the space of a few pages when you’re writing a<br />

short essay. Generally speaking, it’s better to cover less ground using more<br />

detail than it is to cover more ground superficially.<br />

Let’s use the river running thesis as an example. Rather than trying to cover<br />

multiple aspects of river running (e.g., trip planning, safety, and the technical<br />

aspects of running a rapid), the thesis focuses on one aspect of river running<br />

(life-long lessons).<br />

Rule 3: Your thesis statement should be located in the introductory<br />

paragraph after the lead-in but before the essay map.<br />

We’ll talk about the essay map next, but think first about sandwiching your<br />

thesis (the meat) between two slices of bread (the lead -in is the top slice and<br />

the essay map is the bottom slice). Remember that your thesis statement is<br />

the most-important part of the essay, so it should stand out clearly.<br />

Here are three links that give you additional information about the thesis<br />

statement:<br />

Writing Center, UNC, Chapel Hill<br />

Purdue University, OWL<br />

The Essay Map<br />

Let’s cover the essay map. The essay map is the last part of the<br />

introductory paragraph, and its purpose i s to preview the points that<br />

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