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A Reaching Mind<br />
Ramisa Azad<br />
Grade: 8<br />
School: MS 127, Bronx<br />
<strong>Art</strong> Teacher: Brian McKenzie<br />
Colored pencil and graphite<br />
on paper<br />
STUDENT: Through his<br />
own creativity, Mr.<br />
McKenzie inspired me<br />
to push myself beyond<br />
what I thought were<br />
limitations. He taught<br />
me that limitations<br />
are only opportunities<br />
to grow. I now see art<br />
as an opportunity to<br />
express myself through a<br />
language unbound by the<br />
limitations in my spoken<br />
language. When I am<br />
unable to express myself,<br />
art has also provided a<br />
world to which I can escape and be<br />
me — if only for a short amount of<br />
time. I had to pay a lot more attention<br />
to details than I’d ever had to before.<br />
I thought I had finished the work but<br />
I looked closer and added details. It<br />
made me define the work more than<br />
I had. I had to keep going back to<br />
the work, in hopes of improving and<br />
developing it.<br />
TEACHER: A Reaching Mind was the<br />
result of an illustration project.<br />
Students were encouraged to choose<br />
any topic or object to illustrate. The<br />
subject could be realistic or imaginary,<br />
but students had to demonstrate<br />
a facility in using colored pencils.<br />
Ramisa chose a fantasy subject and<br />
applied her skill in the medium to<br />
create a range of tones and values<br />
that enhanced the work. The drawing<br />
performance indicators for grade<br />
eight are reflected in this work.<br />
Ramisa represented a subject in<br />
a novel way and demonstrated a<br />
purposeful use of drawing tools to<br />
create varied line quality and visual<br />
textures. Ramisa is a talented artist<br />
and this work, as well her entire<br />
portfolio, is outstanding. I believe<br />
that talent is discovered and then<br />
nurtured through the instruction at<br />
school, the support of parents, and the<br />
encouragement of the community.<br />
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