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un-on sentence 371<br />

RUN <strong>and</strong> STAND. One who seeks<br />

to be elected to any governmental <strong>of</strong>fice<br />

in the United States runs for election. In<br />

the United Kingdom, one who seeks<br />

election to <strong>of</strong>fice st<strong>and</strong>s for election. Yet<br />

a story in <strong>American</strong> newspapers said<br />

about Democrats in the Senate:<br />

. . . Several <strong>of</strong> their members who will<br />

st<strong>and</strong> for re-election next year were<br />

elected with the support <strong>of</strong> traditional<br />

black liberals.<br />

It would suit a British paper. <strong>The</strong> <strong>American</strong><br />

verb is run, not “st<strong>and</strong>.” Unless the<br />

writer was new to the United States <strong>and</strong><br />

unfamiliar with its idiom, her motivation<br />

for a usage so strange to <strong>American</strong> eyes<br />

<strong>and</strong> ears is obscure.<br />

See also Pronouns, 3.<br />

RUN AWAY <strong>and</strong> RUNAWAY. A<br />

newspaper’s TV guide listed, among<br />

scheduled programs, “Runaway With<br />

the Rich <strong>and</strong> Famous.” If the program<br />

had dealt with a child fleeing from home,<br />

runaway (noun) might be right. However,<br />

inasmuch as the program urged<br />

watchers to run away (verb), the two<br />

words should have been kept separate.<br />

RUN-OFF. See MAJORITY, 1.<br />

Run-on sentence. 1. Classical runons.<br />

2. Comma faults.<br />

1. Classical run-ons<br />

A computer company climaxed a<br />

magazine ad in this way: “<strong>The</strong>y build<br />

more than computers they build relationships.”<br />

Signs throughout vehicles <strong>of</strong> a city’s<br />

transit system say, “PLEASE HOLD ON<br />

SUDDEN STOPS NECESSARY.”<br />

Those are run-on sentences. A run-on<br />

sentence is like two (or more) sentences<br />

glued together, end to end. Each is an independent<br />

clause; that is, it has a subject<br />

<strong>and</strong> verb <strong>and</strong> could st<strong>and</strong> alone as an independent<br />

sentence. Right now the two<br />

are illegitimately paired, neither separate<br />

nor properly joined. <strong>The</strong>y should be either<br />

granted full independence as two<br />

sovereign sentences or united by means<br />

<strong>of</strong> due punctuation. A semicolon (;) or a<br />

dash (—) would unite them properly.<br />

Separated: “<strong>The</strong>y build more than<br />

computers. <strong>The</strong>y build relationships.” /<br />

“PLEASE HOLD ON. SUDDEN<br />

STOPS NECESSARY.” (Better: “SUD-<br />

DEN STOPS ARE NECESSARY.”)<br />

Joined: “<strong>The</strong>y build more than computers;<br />

they build relationships.” Or<br />

“<strong>The</strong>y build more than computers—they<br />

build relationships.” A colon (:) could be<br />

used for punctuation instead. Any <strong>of</strong><br />

those marks would fit the transit notice.<br />

2. Comma faults<br />

A common form <strong>of</strong> run-on (which<br />

some classify as a separate defect) is the<br />

comma fault, also known as the comma<br />

splice. It purports to make a comma the<br />

punctuation between two independent<br />

clauses. A comma cannot h<strong>and</strong>le the job.<br />

It neither separates nor joins the two<br />

clauses adequately. <strong>The</strong> first example is<br />

from a main news story:<br />

In 1949 Gov. Alfred E. Driscoll, a<br />

Republican, <strong>of</strong>fered him a seat on the<br />

New Jersey Superior Court, he gratefully<br />

accepted.<br />

One way to correct the example is to<br />

change the third comma to a period <strong>and</strong><br />

make the last three words a separate sentence.<br />

A second way is to change that<br />

comma to a semicolon. A third way is to<br />

substitute a conjunction, namely <strong>and</strong>.<br />

Similarly, the comma is inadequate in<br />

this snippet from a magazine article:<br />

Catholics didn’t sing, everyone knew<br />

that.<br />

Split it into two three-word sentences or<br />

swap the comma for a semicolon or<br />

dash.

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