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440 to say nothing <strong>of</strong><br />

tortious (TORE-shus, pertaining to a<br />

tort).<br />

TO SAY NOTHING OF. Discussing<br />

lexicographical tradition, two authors<br />

write:<br />

Inevitably, Webster <strong>and</strong> Richardson,<br />

to say nothing <strong>of</strong> Webster <strong>and</strong> Worcester,<br />

disliked one another.<br />

If the authors intended to say nothing <strong>of</strong><br />

Webster <strong>and</strong> Worcester, why did they say<br />

anything <strong>of</strong> them?<br />

“To say nothing <strong>of</strong>” is one <strong>of</strong> several<br />

peculiarly contradictory expressions <strong>and</strong><br />

words. See NOT TO MENTION; Verbal<br />

unmentionables.<br />

See also INEVITABLE.<br />

TOTAL. 1. “A TOTAL OF.” 2. Singular<br />

vs. plural verb.<br />

1. “A TOTAL OF”<br />

In an enumeration such as “two owls<br />

<strong>and</strong> a hen, four larks <strong>and</strong> a wren—a total<br />

<strong>of</strong> eight birds,” a total <strong>of</strong> is a useful<br />

phrase; it denotes a sum <strong>of</strong> the items.<br />

<strong>The</strong> phrase “a total <strong>of</strong>” frequently<br />

starts sentences like these in the press:<br />

A total <strong>of</strong> 60 police <strong>and</strong> protesters<br />

were injured in the scuffles. . . .<br />

A total <strong>of</strong> 402 Iowans who said<br />

they would definitely or probably<br />

attend the state’s precinct caucuses<br />

. . . were interviewed. . . .<br />

A total <strong>of</strong> 143 nations . . . joined in<br />

approving two resolutions challenging<br />

the closing <strong>of</strong> the observer mission.<br />

. . .<br />

What is the need for “a total <strong>of</strong>” when<br />

only one figure is mentioned? Obviously<br />

someone has counted the injured people,<br />

the Iowans, or the nations <strong>and</strong> come up<br />

with a total.<br />

<strong>The</strong> usual purpose is to get around a<br />

journalistic <strong>and</strong> literary taboo on starting<br />

a sentence with a figure. “143 nations,”<br />

or the like, is never supposed to<br />

be written. When, as a young reporter, I<br />

asked an editor why, he said only, “It<br />

would look strange.” Maybe so at first,<br />

because the rule has precluded initial figures,<br />

at least in texts. Headlines may<br />

start with figures.<br />

Even if we accept the rule, “A total<br />

<strong>of</strong>” is usually a superfluous beginning.<br />

“Sixty police” is easy to write <strong>and</strong> read.<br />

“One hundred two Iowans” is not too<br />

hard. “One hundred forty-three nations”<br />

is just a little harder.<br />

An article contained the pair <strong>of</strong> sentences<br />

below. <strong>The</strong> latter is particularly<br />

awkward.<br />

A total <strong>of</strong> 167 delegates will be selected<br />

from the state’s 34 assembly<br />

districts. . . .<br />

A total <strong>of</strong> 2,081 <strong>of</strong> the 4,161 delegates<br />

will be needed to win the nomination.<br />

Is the 4,161 not the total? Better: “Of<br />

the 4,161 delegates, 2,081 will be<br />

needed. . . . ”<br />

See also Numbers, 11.<br />

2. Singular vs. plural verb<br />

A subject starting with “the total <strong>of</strong>”<br />

ordinarily takes a singular verb. “<strong>The</strong> total<br />

<strong>of</strong> 1.7 million votes was the highest<br />

ever recorded in the state.” But a subject<br />

starting with “a total <strong>of</strong>” <strong>of</strong>ten takes a<br />

plural verb. “A total <strong>of</strong> 1.7 million votes<br />

were cast in the state.” <strong>The</strong> first example<br />

emphasizes the total as a statistic. <strong>The</strong><br />

second emphasizes the votes that were<br />

cast.<br />

Some writers fix on total <strong>and</strong> make<br />

every verb singular, however unidiomatic:<br />

votes “was” cast.<br />

See also Collective nouns, 2.<br />

TO, TOO, <strong>and</strong> TWO. Pronounced<br />

the same, the three words are confused<br />

by writers from time to time, perhaps

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