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Class of 2013 University Applications Handbook - UWC Maastricht

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Revising Your Essay<br />

Office <strong>of</strong> Career Guidance & <strong>University</strong> <strong>Applications</strong><br />

Show your essay to your college counselor and teachers, especially English teachers.<br />

Check your spelling, grammar and punctuation. Make sure you haven’t used abbreviations.<br />

This is formal writing!<br />

Cut extra words. Delete repetitive parts and see how many words you can cut by making<br />

one word do the work <strong>of</strong> two or three. Use strong verbs and fresh, original language.<br />

Use strong opening and closing lines.<br />

Avoid clichés. “I want to help humankind” or “[This college] will allow me to fulfill my life<br />

goals”—statements such as these don’t tell us anything about you. (Most people want to<br />

help humankind, and you wouldn’t apply to this college if you didn’t think it would help you<br />

reach your goals … we hope.)<br />

Read the essay aloud. You will catch mistakes, long sentences and awkward phrasing this<br />

way.<br />

Pro<strong>of</strong>read. Pro<strong>of</strong>read again! Then click “submit” on your computer screen.<br />

Congratulations—you are finished!<br />

Additional Resources:<br />

Real College Essays that Work, by Fiske & Hammond (available at <strong>UWC</strong>M)<br />

Conquering the College Admission Essay in 10 Steps, by Alan Gelb (available at <strong>UWC</strong>M)<br />

Sample essays can be found at:<br />

http://www.shmoop.com/college/common-application-essays.html<br />

http://collegeapps.about.com/od/essays/a/EssayPrompts.htm<br />

http://collegeapps.about.com/od/essays/College_Admissions_Essays_Samples_Critiques_and_Writi<br />

ng_Tips.htm<br />

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