Class of 2013 University Applications Handbook - UWC Maastricht
Class of 2013 University Applications Handbook - UWC Maastricht
Class of 2013 University Applications Handbook - UWC Maastricht
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Revising Your Essay<br />
Office <strong>of</strong> Career Guidance & <strong>University</strong> <strong>Applications</strong><br />
Show your essay to your college counselor and teachers, especially English teachers.<br />
Check your spelling, grammar and punctuation. Make sure you haven’t used abbreviations.<br />
This is formal writing!<br />
Cut extra words. Delete repetitive parts and see how many words you can cut by making<br />
one word do the work <strong>of</strong> two or three. Use strong verbs and fresh, original language.<br />
Use strong opening and closing lines.<br />
Avoid clichés. “I want to help humankind” or “[This college] will allow me to fulfill my life<br />
goals”—statements such as these don’t tell us anything about you. (Most people want to<br />
help humankind, and you wouldn’t apply to this college if you didn’t think it would help you<br />
reach your goals … we hope.)<br />
Read the essay aloud. You will catch mistakes, long sentences and awkward phrasing this<br />
way.<br />
Pro<strong>of</strong>read. Pro<strong>of</strong>read again! Then click “submit” on your computer screen.<br />
Congratulations—you are finished!<br />
Additional Resources:<br />
Real College Essays that Work, by Fiske & Hammond (available at <strong>UWC</strong>M)<br />
Conquering the College Admission Essay in 10 Steps, by Alan Gelb (available at <strong>UWC</strong>M)<br />
Sample essays can be found at:<br />
http://www.shmoop.com/college/common-application-essays.html<br />
http://collegeapps.about.com/od/essays/a/EssayPrompts.htm<br />
http://collegeapps.about.com/od/essays/College_Admissions_Essays_Samples_Critiques_and_Writi<br />
ng_Tips.htm<br />
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