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Review of the Air Quality Criteria Document for Particulate Matter

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Table 6-23 Respiratory Sx, lung function and biomarker effects.. What biomarkers areinvestigated? I didn’t find any. Table 6-22 (asthmatic subjects) is entitled just Sx and lungfunction.6-216 6.4.1 This section appears to belong in ch 9??5-225-227 Is it commonly accepted that SO2 cannot be a confounder <strong>for</strong> PM???5-226 Discussion <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> use <strong>of</strong> factor analysis is a good addition.5-238 Mention <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> Lipsett (1997) study is an opportunity to mention <strong>the</strong> role <strong>of</strong> wwod smokeas a constituent <strong>of</strong> PM. This should have been emphasized. In general <strong>the</strong>re is notenough use <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> role <strong>of</strong> geographical differences in PM composition as a means <strong>of</strong>understanding <strong>the</strong> toxic components.5-246 Discussion <strong>of</strong> thresholds. If individual responses to PM prevent establishment <strong>of</strong> athreshold, how does that fit with <strong>the</strong> language <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> CAA that requires setting a NAAQS<strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> most sensitive members <strong>of</strong> society??5-266 6.5 Conclusions# 2. Would it be more useful to describe heterogeneity as geographic differences in <strong>the</strong>composition <strong>of</strong> PM?#3 I think short term v long term exposures need to be considered very, very carefully. We donot know to what extent prior exposure to air pollution is involved in <strong>the</strong> premature death casesin <strong>the</strong> short-term time series studies.#4 The CF data may be telling us that <strong>the</strong>re are geographic differences in PM#5 This conclusion highlights effects during early pregnancy and post-natal periods. However<strong>the</strong>se data are not presented <strong>for</strong>cefully in <strong>the</strong> prior text <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> CD.#9 As I mentioned earlier, I suggest a systematic description and summary <strong>of</strong> effects <strong>of</strong> copollutants.#12 this paragraph (or a separate one) could include a discussion <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> fact that <strong>the</strong>re are likelydifferent mechanisms <strong>for</strong> different PM-induced health effects. For instance, <strong>the</strong> mechanismsunderlying air pollution aggravation <strong>of</strong> asthma will be entirely different from those underlyingdeath from congestive heart failure.#13 Should this paragraph be merged with # 4?Comparison with <strong>the</strong> November 1999 draft CD1) CASAC deemed that draft to be too encyclopedic and yet I don’t see that <strong>the</strong> currentdraft is any less so.2) CASAC recommended emphasis on cardiovascular effects and on infant mortality. Iexpected to see a separate table <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong>se outcomes—certainly <strong>for</strong> infant mortality as<strong>the</strong>re are only a few studies.3) Is <strong>the</strong>re really any more risk assessment in this draft than in <strong>the</strong> 1999 draft?4) I believe that <strong>the</strong> strategy used to select <strong>the</strong> articles cited in <strong>the</strong> CD is still lacking inspite <strong>of</strong> a specific request following <strong>the</strong> last meeting <strong>of</strong> CASAC.A - 51

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