is directly overhead, <strong>the</strong> sun and sky look almost white while <strong>the</strong> sky is blue <strong>of</strong>f to <strong>the</strong>sides in <strong>the</strong> direction <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> scattered light.” The student might wish to step outside some clearday and check whe<strong>the</strong>r <strong>the</strong> horizon is indeed blue and <strong>the</strong> sky white.]“The output <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> Mie calculations includes efficiency factors <strong>for</strong> extinction, Q ext , scattering,Q scat , and absorption, Q abs . The Q ext , Q scat , and Q abs give <strong>the</strong> fraction <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> incident radiationfalling on a circle with <strong>the</strong> same diameter as <strong>the</strong> particle that is ei<strong>the</strong>r scattered or absorbed. Thelight scattering or absorption efficiency factor (in units <strong>of</strong> m 2 /g) is <strong>the</strong> change in <strong>the</strong> lightscattering or absorption efficiencies per unit change in mass <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> fine particle constituent. ...Multiplying <strong>the</strong> values <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> light scattering efficiency factor by <strong>the</strong> aerosol volumeconcentration (in units <strong>of</strong> µm 3 /cm 3 ) gives <strong>the</strong> value <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> light-scattering coefficient, σ sp , (inunits <strong>of</strong> Mm -1 ) <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong>se particles.” (P 4-89, L 15-26) [Students: find 3 different concepts <strong>of</strong>‘efficiency factor’ in this paragraph. For extra credit, find 4 or more.]“.. over a 30-year period (1940 to 1990).” (P4-111, L 3)There are misstatements <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> Agency’s own key regulatory concepts:“Visibility impairment is defined as any humanly perceptible change in visibility (lightextinction, visual range, contrast, or coloration).” (P 4-85, L 3) [The hypo<strong>the</strong>tical observer in apure Rayleigh atmosphere thus experiences impaired visibility during each sunset and sunrise.Will <strong>the</strong> Sierra Club have to sue be<strong>for</strong>e <strong>the</strong> Agency addresses <strong>the</strong> long-standing and pervasiveproblem <strong>of</strong> twice-daily twilight?]“dv = 10 log 10 (σ ext /10 Mm -1 )” (P 4-95, L 13) [This makes one deciview correspond to a 26%ra<strong>the</strong>r than 10% change in extinction, and makes an extinction coefficient <strong>of</strong> 100 Mm -1correspond to 10 dv ra<strong>the</strong>r than <strong>the</strong> 23 dv indicated in Figure 4-20. To be fair, this error isaccurately reproduced from <strong>the</strong> 1996 CD, and is faithfully carried into <strong>the</strong> 2001 Staff Paper.]Currency, competence, and relevance, by subsectionWhat are appropriate standards <strong>for</strong> review? In terms <strong>of</strong> currency and competence, a defaultoption <strong>for</strong> <strong>the</strong> 2001 CD is to reprint <strong>the</strong> 6+ page summary <strong>of</strong> visibility effects from <strong>the</strong> 1996 CD,section 8.9.1. That text is clear and accurate. If new text is needed, it should be no less clearand accurate. In terms <strong>of</strong> relevance, I start from <strong>the</strong> presumption that any secondary standard <strong>for</strong>PM will be specified in terms <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> health-based primary standard, currently PM 2.5 as defined by<strong>the</strong> FRM. A key burden <strong>of</strong> section 4.3, <strong>the</strong>n, is to document a consistent relationship betweenvisibility and measured fine particle mass.4.3.1 Introduction: The second <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> two paragraphs is up to date and appropriate (although<strong>the</strong> citation <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> IWAQM document (USEPA 1995a) is puzzling). The first paragraph,in contrast, is confused and unnecessary – why should <strong>the</strong> 2001 CD open its visibilityupdate with a garbled rehash <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> Agency’s 1979 distinction between reasonablyattributable and regional haze?4.3.2 Factors affecting atmospheric visibility: There is nothing in here drawn from workdone since 1996, save <strong>for</strong> a passing reference to current visibility conditions from <strong>the</strong>Agency’s latest trend report. Instead, <strong>the</strong>re are odd definitions (e.g. “The visual range is<strong>the</strong> closest distance ...”), unused definitions (e.g. multiple scattering), incorrectdefinitions that were treated correctly in <strong>the</strong> 1996 CD (e.g. Mie scattering, as alreadynoted), and a similarly varied range <strong>of</strong> ‘facts’. It is dispiriting to find <strong>the</strong> Agencydiscarding a document that this Committee spent two years reviewing, in order to slaptoge<strong>the</strong>r an erratic new assemblage that is no more up-to-date.Is visibility (as crudely indexed by, say, visual range) inversely related to ambientparticle concentration (as crudely indexed by, say, PM 2.5 )? One surely couldn’t establishA - 83
that point from this review! “Visibility impairment may be connected to air pollutantproperties... Human vision is one <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> factors ... <strong>the</strong> appearance <strong>of</strong> a distant object isdetermined by illumination <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> sight path ... Visibility within a sight path longer thanapproximately 100 km .. is affected by changes in <strong>the</strong> properties <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> atmosphere over<strong>the</strong> length <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> sight path.”4.3.3 Optical properties <strong>of</strong> particles: Of <strong>the</strong> 23 different papers cited in this subsection, 17were published by 1994 and 13 were reviewed in <strong>the</strong> 1996 CD. The technical discussionis very confused, and diverse extinction efficiencies are jumbled toge<strong>the</strong>r with nocontext.The Staff Paper includes a cross-plot (Figure 5-2) <strong>of</strong> ASOS airport visibility data versus24-h PM 2.5 concentrations at Fresno, CA. This is exactly <strong>the</strong> sort <strong>of</strong> analysis that isneeded to support a PM 2.5 standard <strong>for</strong> visibility and is missing from <strong>the</strong> CD. But it isonly <strong>the</strong> first step: is <strong>the</strong> rest <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> country just like Fresno? The CD instead gives usindigestible factoids: “Richards et al. (1991) reported a scattering efficiency <strong>for</strong> fineparticles <strong>of</strong> ammonium sulfate <strong>of</strong> 1.2 m 2 /g .. Sulfate scattering efficiencies have beenreported to increase by a factor <strong>of</strong> two when <strong>the</strong> size distribution went from 0.15 to 0.5µm .. The calculated scattering efficiencies <strong>for</strong> sulfates were 4.1 m 2 /g <strong>for</strong> 100% massremoval and 3.4 and 5.6 m 2 /g <strong>for</strong> 25% mass removal. Calculated scattering efficiencies<strong>for</strong> carbon particles ranged from 0.9 to 8.1 m 2 /g ..”4.3.4 Effect <strong>of</strong> relative humidity: This section cites a higher proportion <strong>of</strong> recent work and isbetter written.4.3.5 Measures <strong>of</strong> visibility: Of <strong>the</strong> 24 different papers cited in this subsection, 17 werepublished by 1994 and 13 were reviewed in <strong>the</strong> 1996 CD. I don’t see any newin<strong>for</strong>mation.And including “fine particulate matter concentrations” as a “measure <strong>of</strong> visibility” isra<strong>the</strong>r begging <strong>the</strong> whole question, is it not? The figure (4-22) supporting this subsectionsimply assumes a relationship <strong>for</strong> which <strong>the</strong> previous subsections laid no <strong>the</strong>oretical orempirical basis. (Note that <strong>the</strong> assumed Koschmieder coefficient in this figure differsfrom that used in <strong>the</strong> next (4-23).)4.3.6 Visibility monitoring methods and networks: The new ASOS and expandedIMPROVE networks are appropriate topics <strong>for</strong> inclusion in this CD. The extinctionbudgets in Table 4-7 are problematic, however, because <strong>the</strong> text has given no <strong>the</strong>oreticalor empirical basis <strong>for</strong> constructing and understanding <strong>the</strong>m. It would better support avisibility-based secondary standard to summarize <strong>the</strong> measured extinction/PM 2.5 ratiosand regression relationships observed at those sites with optical data.4.3.7 Visibility modeling: Modeling can’t be credible until <strong>the</strong> science is, so I didn’t bo<strong>the</strong>rwith this subsection.4.3.8 Trends in visibility impairment: Much <strong>of</strong> this subsection (P 4-109, L 4-26) concernsextinction budgeting ra<strong>the</strong>r than trends in space and time. As noted above at subsection4.3.6, <strong>the</strong> text has laid no basis <strong>for</strong> such apportionment. Moreover, some <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>characterizations are a bit suspect -- <strong>for</strong> example, <strong>the</strong> statement “In several areas <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong>west, sulfates account <strong>for</strong> over 50% <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> annual average aerosol extinction” is notsupported by Table 4-7.The trend discussion is largely carried over from <strong>the</strong> 1996 CD; Figure 4-23 is an update<strong>of</strong> Figure 6-112 by only three years and Figure 4-24 is a reprint <strong>of</strong> Figure 6-113.Considering that this is supposed to be an incremental update <strong>of</strong> <strong>the</strong> 1996 CD, and thatA - 84
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