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Suggested feedback on organisation<br />

Students are very interested to hear about the reality of working in a bank.<br />

You should include things about working hours and clothes as well as details<br />

about what you do. In particular, students are interested in learning about the<br />

rewards and challenges of working in a bank, of dealing with customers and<br />

of remembering all the trades.<br />

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Students want to know what skills, qualifications, personality and experience<br />

are most<br />

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suited for working in a bank. Moreover, students want to know<br />

about professional development and promotion.<br />

Students should hear your expert advice for young graduates entering the<br />

bank. You can also talk about tips on what to include in an effective resume<br />

and points to highlight in an interview.<br />

Good paragraphing but cohesive devices<br />

could be used to present the three<br />

suggestions, e.g. first, also, finally<br />

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