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The city _____ take a dog from its owner unless the dog hurts somebody.<br />

Dog owners _____ follow these laws, or they _____ pay money for breaking<br />

the laws. In addition, dog owners _____ try to be thoughtful. They _____<br />

think about their neighbors, and they _____ _____ do anything to make<br />

their neighbors angry. The city _____ pass a law to make people thought ­<br />

ful, but we _____ all try to think of our neighbors.<br />

V. !ontrolled !omposition Dicto­comp<br />

Your teacher will read the paragraph above three times. Listen carefully,<br />

but do not take notes. After the third reading, write the paragraph<br />

as well as you can from memory. Check your punctuation and sentence<br />

combining techniques.<br />

VI. !ontrolled !omposition Variety in sentence types<br />

Good writers use some short, simple sentences and some longer<br />

sentences. Rewrite the paragraph below and vary the length of the<br />

sentences. You may make some longer by combining them with coordinate<br />

conjunctions, subordinate conjunctions, or conjunctive adverbs.<br />

Here is a list of the connectors we have used so far:<br />

Coordinate<br />

Conjunctions<br />

and<br />

but<br />

or<br />

so<br />

Subordinate<br />

Conjunctions<br />

after<br />

so…that<br />

although such…that<br />

because unless<br />

before until<br />

even though when<br />

if<br />

while<br />

Conjunctive<br />

Adverbs<br />

as a result<br />

besides<br />

however<br />

in addition<br />

moreover<br />

nevertheless<br />

on the other hand<br />

therefore<br />

“Cats and Dogs”<br />

Some people like cats. Other people like dogs. People have strong<br />

ideas about cats. People have strong ideas about dogs. People often<br />

don’t have both cats and dogs in the same house.<br />

Cat owners talk about their pets with love. Cats are quiet. Cats are<br />

clean. Cats are good in apartments. They don’t need a lot of space. They<br />

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