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Additional Combinations of Activities for Week Five:<br />

Ten Teacher or Student-Led Activities for Word Choice<br />

1. Build a word bank (in your notebook,, bulletin board, classroom word wall, etc.) of words you like.<br />

2. Build a memorial <strong>to</strong> DEAD words. Find a mutual place in the classroom <strong>to</strong> get rid of all dead words<br />

such as good, nice, very, etc.<br />

3. Find HEAVY words. In any piece of writing, some words and phrases are asked <strong>to</strong> carry most of the<br />

weight, most of the meaning. Get an excerpt from any piece that is rich with HEAVY words. Students<br />

should circle those words that carry the most weight then compare <strong>to</strong> see if others chose the same.<br />

Look through your own writing <strong>to</strong> see if you can identify HEAVY words. You should be able <strong>to</strong> do so.<br />

4. Connotation/Denotation Thesaurus work. Students work in groups <strong>to</strong> look up a word (from a list of<br />

words that have multiple meanings) provided by the teacher. Ask students <strong>to</strong> choose 6-10 of the most<br />

interesting diverse variations on their word theme, and create a lesson in which they make the nuances<br />

of meaning clear. They can do written or oral definitions, give a quiz, dramatize the meanings—or do<br />

anything they wish <strong>to</strong> make the meanings clear, and <strong>to</strong> make the point that synonyms are not all<br />

interchangeable.<br />

5. Talk about the life of language. Have a discussion about some words that are no longer in use and<br />

new words that have just been created. Make a list of words that we use now that will most likely be<br />

gone in the next fifty years.<br />

6. Take out JARGON. Again, the books for dummieshas grown popular because of their ability <strong>to</strong> remove<br />

jargon from typically difficult text. Bring in a piece of technical writing and have students (possibly in<br />

pairs) work on revising it <strong>to</strong> make it more user-friendly and less jargonistic.<br />

7. Collect quotations with really great language in it. One of my favorites is by Mark Twain, “Loyalty <strong>to</strong><br />

petrified opinion never broke a chain or freed a human soul.” I love this quote because the words are so<br />

rich. They are simple enough words individually, but <strong>to</strong>gether in this sense it becomes very rich.<br />

8. Play word games so that students become fascinated with words. Tell about the origins of words such<br />

as Bikini (named after the island where the a<strong>to</strong>mic bomb was tested—recognizing the bathing suit could<br />

create the same reaction). Talk about cliches and their origins. Ask about words or sayings that are<br />

specific <strong>to</strong> family members. What colloquial sayings do your students know?<br />

9. Highlight all the verbs and nouns in your writing and revise at least half of them <strong>to</strong> improve. Changing<br />

verbs often requires rewriting or restructuring the sentences. Make sure they are well-aware of all the<br />

“be” verbs.<br />

10. Pay close attention <strong>to</strong> adverbs, especially used as taglines in dialogue. Use “said.” As Strunk and<br />

White so eloquently say “Do not dress words up by adding -ly <strong>to</strong> them, as though putting a hat on a<br />

horse. “ -- Elements of Style, 4th ed..<br />

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