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Week Six, Day Four and Five: Fine-tune Your Powers of Observation and Description<br />

Stepping In<strong>to</strong> a Painting<br />

Objective: Students will use the "Stepping in<strong>to</strong> a Painting" handout <strong>to</strong> create a descriptive essay.<br />

Time: One class period<br />

• Instruct students <strong>to</strong> select a fairly large picture from the following art pieces.<br />

• Ask students <strong>to</strong> take out a clean sheet of paper and copy the sentence frames below<br />

from an overhead transparency as they examine the picture.<br />

• After filling out the handout, students will use the information <strong>to</strong> write a descriptive<br />

essay in first person point of view.<br />

STEPPING INTO A PAINTING HANDOUT<br />

1. What is your first response or reaction <strong>to</strong> the picture? What emotions are awakened in you?<br />

2. I am standing_________________. (Tell exactly where.)<br />

3. From here I can see________, but I can't see.____________.<br />

4. I notice the temperature is ______, and I think the time of day is ____because______.<br />

5. I am able <strong>to</strong> identify the figures of ________, and I imagine he/she (they) is (are) saying, "____."<br />

6. Tasting the scene reminds me of the taste of _____and when I <strong>to</strong>uch ( any part of the scene; name<br />

one)_____it feels like_______.<br />

7. I do ( do not) feel comfortable and safe in my surroundings because_____; furthermore, it<br />

reminds me of_____(perhaps a place you've been).<br />

8. As I take a closer look at the scene, I notice that at first I overlooked_____.<br />

9. Standing in these surroundings, I recall memories of _____(people, places, events, sights, or<br />

ambiguous things like memories).<br />

10. As I take a final look at this scene, I notice_____which I had not noticed before.<br />

11. Give the painting/picture a title.<br />

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