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Frogpond 34.3 • Autumn 2011 (pdf) - Haiku Society of America

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Some writers get upset by “deja ku”. I don’t . As an admirer <strong>of</strong><br />

Herold, I feel honoured to have written a haiku so similar to one<br />

<strong>of</strong> his, especially since he told me it is a favourite at readings.<br />

Corrections to 34:2<br />

p. 6: Joseph M. Kusmiss wrote to say: “Hi, I was happy to get a<br />

haiku published in this issue . . . but when I saw it it was:<br />

the evening news<br />

I communicate with<br />

my inner sociopath<br />

instead <strong>of</strong> what I sent (see below):<br />

the evening news<br />

I commune with<br />

my inner sociopath<br />

Typo or change? I like my version a lot better.”<br />

Editors’ Note: And, so do we. Sorry for the error..<br />

p. 22: John Barlow provides a rich background for the correction<br />

to his haiku: Unfortunately a couple <strong>of</strong> typos were introduced<br />

to my haiku [on p. 22], which should have read:<br />

sparroweight the groundsel bends to ground<br />

(Instead <strong>of</strong>: sparrowweight the groundsel bends to the ground)<br />

While the introduction <strong>of</strong> a second article disrupted only<br />

the rhythm, the more conventional unhyphenated “sparrowweight”<br />

was further from the intention. In each instance that<br />

I use this technique the linguistic amalgamation is limited to<br />

only the last letter <strong>of</strong> the first word and the first letter <strong>of</strong> the<br />

following word, and as these are identical one is discarded.<br />

The resultant portmanteau then forms the first or last word<br />

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112 <strong>Haiku</strong> <strong>Society</strong> <strong>of</strong> <strong>America</strong>

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