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Ohio University College of Business Communication Standards

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MEMORANDUM<br />

DATE: January 18, 2003<br />

Sample Memo <strong>of</strong> Transmittal<br />

Optional heading; can be omitted.<br />

1 to 1½ inch top margin before date.<br />

TO: Cheryl Bryant, Director, Recycling Program<br />

Office <strong>of</strong> Associated Students<br />

FROM: Alan Christopher<br />

Always initial your memos above the end <strong>of</strong> your last name.<br />

SUBJECT: INCREASING PARTICIPATION IN SUN COAST UNIVERSITY’S<br />

RECYCLING PROGRAM<br />

Here is the report you requested December 10 about the status <strong>of</strong> Sun Coast <strong>University</strong>’s<br />

recycling program, along with recommendations for increasing its use. The study included<br />

both primary and secondary research. The primary study focused on a survey <strong>of</strong> members <strong>of</strong><br />

the Sun Coast <strong>University</strong> campus community.<br />

First paragraph announces report and<br />

gives broad overview <strong>of</strong> research.<br />

The campus recycling program is strong. Yet, my research shows that we should be able to<br />

increase participation and achieve our goal <strong>of</strong> setting an excellent example for both campus<br />

residents and the local community. Recommendations for increasing campus participation in<br />

the program include educating potential users about the program and making recycling on<br />

campus easy.<br />

Second paragraph highlights report findings and recommendations.<br />

My focus group, especially Suzy Quartz and Joe Smith, made this research stronger by<br />

assisting me in questionnaire development. My business communication class helped me to<br />

pilot test the survey instrument and collect the research data. The enthusiasm and support <strong>of</strong><br />

my peers contributed greatly to the success <strong>of</strong> this This paragraph acknowledges others’ help.<br />

OAS research project.<br />

Please call, Ms. Bryant, when I may provide additional information or answer questions.<br />

Also, let me know when I can assist you in implementing some <strong>of</strong> the recommendations in<br />

this report by developing promotional Final paragraph establishes warm tone by using the name <strong>of</strong><br />

materials for our recycling campaign.<br />

the receiver, including first-person pronouns and<br />

volunteering to help. Offers to answer questions and looks<br />

forward to follow-up actions.<br />

Adapted from: Thill, J. V., & Bovee, C. L. (2003). Excellence in <strong>Business</strong> <strong>Communication</strong>,<br />

240, 257. Upper Saddle River, NJ: Prentice Hall.<br />

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