The Green caldron - University Library

April 1961 7
The problem with which I had the most difficulty was that of fitting
the words that I wished to say with the rime scheme of the Shakespearean
sonnet. For example, in line two of my sonnet I would have preferred to
substitute the word shore for the word coast, but I couldn't find a synonym
for ghost in line four. Actually the two words differ little in meaning, but
I prefer the alliteration of "Cyprian shore" rather than the phrase "Cyprian
coast." I found that I constantly had to change the meaning of the sentences
and order of the words to fit the rime scheme of the Shakespearean sonnet,
which is a-b-a-b-c-d-c-d-e-f-e-f-g-g.
Another problem with which I had difficulty was that of compressing or
enlarging my thoughts to fit the meter of the sonnet. Sometimes I was
forced to use adjectives which seemed rather trite or flat to me in order to
fill up the decasyllabic line. Examples of this "padding" are "despairing
hopelessness" and "anguished cry." In the last line of my sonnet there are
only nine syllables because I couldn't word it in the way I wanted to with
ten syllables. I considered inserting the word him after "And let me forget,"
but I felt that the meaning of the poem would be destroyed. I wanted to
convey the idea that the girl wants not only to forget him, but also to
forget his love.
Although I had difficulty with the meter and rime scheme of the Shake-
spearean sonnet, I am fairly well satisfied with my first attempt to write a
sonnet. The meter and rime seemed to become more and more natural as
I went along. Although I felt rather restricted by the form of the sonnet,
actually it is meant to be a guide rather than a hindrance. I felt that even-
tually I could learn to confine my thoughts to its form. Wordsworth, one
of the greatest poets of all times, wrote the following sonnet on the subject
of the strict rime-phrase of the sonnet
Nuns fret not at their convent's narrow room
And hermits are contented with their cells
And students in their pensive citadels
Maids at the wheel, the weaver at his loom,
Sits blithe and happy ; bees that soar for bloom
High as the highest peak of Turners Fells,
Will murmur by the hour in foxglove bells.
In truth the prison unto which we doom
Ourselves, no prison is : and hence to me.
In sundry moods, 'twas pastime to be bound
Within the sonnet's scanty plot of ground.
Pleased if some souls (for such there needs must be)
Who have felt the weight of too much liberty.
Should find brief solace there, as I have found.
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