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omb) are lost in an attempt at perspective and realistic detail. Closely focused-on actions are represented best. Most of the story is concerned with action depicted in closed single moments. He uses these transitions not just to advance action but to adjust the focus in each minimal scene, producing a concentration on single elements that is dizzying. The fight scene [fig 14] is economically depicted in classic comic style, with sparse, relevant motion lines, and is the best example of this focusing technique. Closeups of parts act as punctuation, causing a pause at the bottom of the page and a breather in the fight scene, after the action-filled complete-view panels of the fight. The figures illustrate the action rather than themselves, due to frequent overlapping and cropping. ,This considered selectivity is part of efficient narration. ", ,' Figure 15 Sorfa Teargas Me and I p6 (reduced) 48
In the last frame [fig 15] the main character stands alone against a blank background. The frame is classically composed. Visually it reads like a punchline, but the text is ambiguous, as if part of the script has been left out. The script as a whole is bitty and unclear, lacking motivation. This is not neccessarily a problem in itself, but the comic is drawn as if possessing a clear, functional narrative, and there is no apparent reason for this failure at the end. The lettering is amateurish, sloppy, and uncomfortable, which ruins the finish of the comic. Solid areas of black, used frequently, mitigate the tentative sensitive lines, producing through contrast a visual liveliness that quickens the pace of the action. Last Week is, at this point, my longest story. It is a prose passage rather than a narrative; the form of the text is that of a letter, addressing a specific person directly. The title page is one panel. Each subsequent page is divided into roughly equivalent sections, which are then subdivided, either into separate frames or by means of text superimposed onto larger frames. Many of the devices used in Ourselves Apart are used agam. For its effect the comic relies on an accumulation of details, and all the parts are completely interdependant. Various disparate elements are thrown together. Quotes are added in to supplement the text, creating an expression of an emotional state, rather than a message. It is a flat comic, in the sense that the tone remains even throughout and the pace does not change. Each frame is an elaboration of the mood of the text, and text and pictures are equivalent, having the same weight. Some frames are purely text [fig 16]. The meaning lies more in the design or layout than in a narrative. Instead of clearly stating my intentions, or even alluding to them, I embroider around them. It is a dissection of 49
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A CRITICAL ANALYSIS OF SOUTH AFRICA
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Page 5 and 6: "Does he paint? He fain would write
Page 7 and 8: 1. INTRODUCTION What I am attemptin
Page 9 and 10: existence ... until food gets short
Page 11 and 12: is making comics respectable in the
Page 13 and 14: Most of these comics are produced a
Page 15 and 16: 2. DEFINITIONS AND TERMINOLOGY The
Page 17 and 18: In addition, extraverbal sounds, or
Page 19 and 20: The decision as to whether visual l
Page 21 and 22: For the first two decades of the tw
Page 23 and 24: Wertham's book The Seduction of the
Page 25 and 26: Undergrounds were amoral, sexual, s
Page 27 and 28: coalesced into comics intended for
Page 29 and 30: 3. ANALYSIS Four different groups o
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Page 33 and 34: positive shapes, even or especially
Page 35 and 36: 3.2. KOMIKSOC The confessional aspe
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Page 39: Figure 2 Franklin After the Plagues
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Page 58 and 59: Figure 19 Breytenbach Eddie Jumped
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Page 62 and 63: Sorfa's technique saves, lives up t
Page 64 and 65: Figure 23 Casey Showcase: Item 1 pI
Page 66 and 67: Two people, a scriptwriter and an a
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Page 70 and 71: Casey's understanding of blacks and
Page 72 and 73: From the whimsical, poetic scripts
Page 74 and 75: This same regularity forces pace to
Page 76 and 77: In previous comics, my 'visual writ
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Page 82 and 83: Teo iNTE.N5E · Figure 38 Sorfa Spi
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Page 86 and 87: The text of Bone Staircase, by Freu
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etween form and content, but also p
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Another example is figure 8, from A
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structured. Familiar sources, conte
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Some verbal comic conventions are m
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Both artists make use of a great va
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character, Chico D, into a martyr a
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Figure 17 Van Zyl Die Besoek p5 112
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The transitions between panels are
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simply by its silence and inexplica
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Figure 22 Botes Die Mens 118
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Verdwaalde Harte [fig 23J, also by
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Figure 27 Dog, Winterbach Rewerie p
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In Die Hero van die Bitch [fig 29],
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draws the reader's attention to the
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Figure 32 Bates Siembamba 128
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The Proverbs are selected and reint
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In Klapmuts Polisie Slaan Toe, Bote
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Ina van Zyl is more concerned with
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I ROSIE is NUUT deur Ina van ;Zyl I
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M y DEliO !r1OTHER H I..4NG UP I LE
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Botes is very good at acidic social
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The second episode of Missileman, b
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In Kanker Botes' subject is again t
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coincides with the appearance of th
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closeup, then pulls away to explain
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stories in issue 1 are in English,
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4. CONCLUSION The comics are all pr
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The most common genres (my definiti
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the first generation whose world is
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ways of creating this entrance poin
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S. BIBLIOGRAPHY BARKER, M. 1989. Co
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Thames and Hudson. NEAL, C. 1987. T
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