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Rue, by Sididis, begins well. The first page, certainly, is both more professional and<br />

conventional than work he did for Komiksoc. The setting is· a pop concert; Sididis always<br />

confines his subject matter to a very particular subculture, one heavily informed by<br />

comics and music. The exaggerated violence of this story is derived from mainstream<br />

comics, as is the standard layout of the first page and the action-to-action transitions<br />

throughout [fig 8].<br />

However, as in almost all his other comics, . it deteriorates and loses intensity. The<br />

detailed drawings of the first page become sparser and sparer line drawings, which in<br />

comparison look incomplete, as if areas of black have been left out. After the carefully<br />

paced first page, narrative and explanatory detail become verbal rather than visual, a kind<br />

of shortcut. Visual explanation depends on shifts from detail to detail; this is instead<br />

telescoped into frantic speech bubbles, placed in rather spare frames [fig 9]. Fussy<br />

drawing had been a problem for Sididis in Komiksoc publications, and this is a problem<br />

he has solved. However, the most dramatic moments of the story fall flat because of<br />

insufficient drawing and a lack of emphasis.<br />

Figure 8 Sididis Rue p 1<br />

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