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E n g l i s h<br />

Reaching <strong>the</strong><br />

Happy Medium<br />

by Kimberly<br />

Aurich<br />

ENGL 1301: Composition and Rhetoric I. Kimi’s<br />

essay, titled, “Finding that Happy Medium” is <strong>the</strong> type<br />

that embodies <strong>the</strong> characteristics of good writing,<br />

and one that instructors are proud to receive. For this<br />

particular assignment, students were asked to write<br />

an illustratiion or exemplification essay, characterized<br />

by descriptive writing that utilizes examples or<br />

illustrations to support <strong>the</strong> concepts <strong>the</strong> writer wishes<br />

to present. In this particular piece, Kimi instantly<br />

captures <strong>the</strong> reader’s attention through a richly<br />

descriptive introduction that recreates a moment in<br />

which she is suspended in reverie, giving way to an<br />

enlightening passage that illustrates <strong>the</strong> challenges<br />

facing today’s college student—trying to find balance<br />

in a hectic world. Kimi’s use of vivid language and<br />

narrative ability allow for an enjoyable read, and one<br />

that provides for <strong>the</strong> reader a snapshot of a day in <strong>the</strong><br />

life of a modern college co-ed.<br />

Amy Cook<br />

The morning was cool, brisk and promising with a gentle<br />

breeze that seemed to coax <strong>the</strong> sun’s rays over <strong>the</strong> horizon to<br />

caress <strong>the</strong> crisp green blades of grass that stretched in a picture<br />

of cropped order across <strong>the</strong> lawn of <strong>the</strong> park. The pond below<br />

<strong>the</strong> knoll sparkled and grinned up as I strolled somberly on <strong>the</strong><br />

sidewalk, my eyes squinting with contemplation. Despite <strong>the</strong><br />

extraordinary scene that was spread out before me <strong>the</strong> image<br />

that immediately caught my attention was a man, seated on a<br />

rickety park bench with his cane laid beside him and his hands<br />

folded complacently over his lap. A whimsical smile touched <strong>the</strong><br />

corner of his lips and eyes, laugh lines strewn around <strong>the</strong> seams.<br />

Life had begun to get to me, classes and social events weren’t<br />

mixing well and my grades were slipping. I was young and goodlooking<br />

but still this man seemed far more content to be here<br />

than I. Why, I wondered, was this How could I balance life so<br />

that I too could sit <strong>the</strong>re one day and look back with a smile<br />

A classic problem in <strong>the</strong> college student’s daily life is balance<br />

(how to juggle work with play and everything in between). The<br />

combination of stress, sleep deprivation and pressure piled<br />

on by not only <strong>the</strong>ir parents but <strong>the</strong>ir friends to attend parties<br />

can weigh down even <strong>the</strong> most exuberant of students. Ano<strong>the</strong>r<br />

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W r i t i n g A c r o s s t h e C u r r i c u l u m

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