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Improving Student Writing Skills - cse crafts

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Teaching Using the Traits of Good <strong>Writing</strong><br />

Sentence Fluency<br />

Good sentence fluency makes writing that is easy to read aloud. You don’t have<br />

to stop and start and you don’t get jumbled up, even the first time you try to read<br />

something. Also, not all sentences sound the same—in a piece with good sentence<br />

fluency, the writer uses many different lengths and avoids always starting a .<br />

sentence with the same word. Sometimes weird sentence fluency can come from<br />

words being out of place.<br />

Directions: Revise the following passage for sentence fluency by changing some of<br />

the first words and sentence lengths.<br />

I love school lunch. It’s always totally yummy. I like hamburgers best. I don’t like<br />

mustard. I don’t use mustard. I always finish first. I even eat the coleslaw.<br />

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