Reviewer Comments - EERE
Reviewer Comments - EERE
Reviewer Comments - EERE
Create successful ePaper yourself
Turn your PDF publications into a flip-book with our unique Google optimized e-Paper software.
2011 Algae Platform Review – <strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong> are direct transcripts of commentary and material provided by the Platform’s<br />
Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />
developed in this work provides an opportunity for exploring engineering research questions using model<br />
and data tools at multiple fidelities as may be required by the specific question at hand.<br />
Project: 9.6.1.6 PNNL<br />
Title: Collaborative: Algae-based Integrated Assessment Framework<br />
Presenter: Richard Skaggs<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 5.57 1.18 7<br />
Progress 5.86 0.99 7<br />
Relevance 5.86 1.25 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 5.71 0.88 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 7<br />
The Approach in this project is well reasoned.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 4<br />
This is a modelling project that incorporates features such as the cost of land. Productivity is based upon<br />
the canonical Redfield ratio, but it is now well known that different algal taxonomic groups (e.g. green<br />
algae vs diatoms) have different Redfield ratios. It would be good to try to do a general model, and then<br />
test it against a specific case, and adjust Redfield ratios appropriately for a species that is an actual<br />
biofuels' target (e.g., Nitzschia as a diatom; Chlorella as a green alga).<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Effort provides integration and systematic biophysical evaluation of resource demands and constraints on<br />
microalgae biofuel production with harvesting logistics and cost analysis coupled with sound project<br />
management.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Overall Impression text.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 6<br />
The approach is to build CO2 and nutrient source data bases for inclusion into a DOE analysis<br />
framework. The approach is sound and feasible.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 5<br />
The approach appears reasonable but its very difficult to differentiate if from the previous PNNL<br />
Page 109 of 223