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2011 Algae Platform Review – <strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong> are direct transcripts of commentary and material provided by the Platform’s<br />

Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />

analysis tool to map this potential. This is expected to provide a good baseline to assess potential across<br />

U.S. waters. Differential costs of development across the landscape can be included later to calculate the<br />

net value in specified areas. 2.3. NC 2.4. NC 2.5. Our previous analyses, including international and<br />

historic activities, are documented in our FY10 report “Macroalgae as a Biomass Feedstock: A<br />

Preliminary Analysis”. 2.6. We agree that the macroalgae growth model needs critical peer-review and<br />

validation. The current model considers energy balance components including PAR and light and water<br />

quality aspects such as water temperature, salinity, and turbidity. Growth rate and other biophysical<br />

parameters for Macrocystis and Saccharina/Laminaria will be derived from peer-reviewed literature.<br />

Observation data from the literature and field sites will be used for validation.<br />

3. Project Relevance<br />

The project both identifies with and contributes to meeting the platform goals and objectives of the<br />

Biomass Program Multi-Year Program Plan<br />

The project has considered applications of the expected outputs<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />

The project should be viewed as not relevant without the requisite preliminary analysis.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 3<br />

Much of the information related to this project already exists in the literature. Its assembly and modelling<br />

has merit if realistically done.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 3<br />

There is a need to evaluate macroalgae as biomass resource to enable Biomass Multi-Year Program Plan<br />

goals.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 4<br />

See Overall Impressions text.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 5<br />

The project is relevant to strategic goals.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 6 Criteria Score: 2<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 7 Criteria Score: 3<br />

Relevance of survey results is contigent on validation of growth and sustainable harvest models.<br />

Presenter Response<br />

3.1. NC 3.2. The macroalgae growth model requires critical peer-review and validation. Observation data<br />

from the literature and PNNL's own field sites will be used for model validation. 3.3. NC 3.4. NC 3.5. NC<br />

3.6. We agree that the macroalgae growth model requires critical peer-review and validation. The current<br />

model considers energy balance components including PAR and light attenuation as well as water quality<br />

aspects such as water temperature, salinity, and turbidity. Growth rate and other biophysical parameters<br />

for Macrocystis and Saccharina/Laminaria will be derived from peer-reviewed literature. Observation<br />

data from the literature and field sites will be used for model validation. Results from the macroalgae<br />

growth model can be used to guide decisions around harvest intensity<br />

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