Reviewer Comments - EERE
Reviewer Comments - EERE
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2011 Algae Platform Review – <strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong> are direct transcripts of commentary and material provided by the Platform’s<br />
Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />
end bioproduct also limits understanding of the relevance”, the project is not proposing genetic<br />
engineering of Saccharina latissima although this fundamental suggestion would be of interest to other<br />
agencies. Our “end bioproduct” is a drop-in biofuel that would be derived via hydrothermal liquefaction<br />
and hydrotreating to make a renewable non-oxygenated liquid transportation fuel. Review comment 2:<br />
Site selection, economic analysis, aquaculture design and implementation are very worthy endeavors.<br />
However, such an expansive analysis was not within the scope of this project. I agree that this would be<br />
challenging and many factors need to be considered. Generating some (but certainly not all) of the<br />
technical data upon which to base decisions about the feasibility of macroalgae harvesting and/or<br />
aquaculture and subsequent conversion to biofuels and other bioproducts is one of the goals of this<br />
project. Review comment 3: Review comment 4: Review comment 5: Thank-you Review comment 6:<br />
4. Critical Success Factors<br />
The project has identified critical factors, (including technical, business, market, regulatory, and legal<br />
factors) that impact the potential technical and commercial success of the project<br />
The project has presented adequate plans to recognize, address, and overcome these factors<br />
The project has the opportunity to advance the state of technology and impact the viability of commercial<br />
algal biomass feedstock supply and conversion, through one or more of the following:<br />
i. Cross-Cutting Analysis (ex. economic analysis, sustainability analysis, resource assessments, risk<br />
assessments)<br />
ii. Feedstock Supply R&D (ex. biology, cultivation, resource use, biomass characteristics,<br />
harvesting/dewatering)<br />
iii. Downstream Refining R&D (ex. extraction, conversion, fuel, products, fuel/product infrastructure and<br />
end-use)<br />
iv. Environmental sustainability (example: water use, GMOs, energy consumption)<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 2<br />
A more detailed assessment of the critical success factors are highly warranted. To justify the project as<br />
beneficial to the coastal biofuels production where most of the world's population and demand exists is<br />
woefully inadequate as justification. It could be that the nature of the feedstock will require comminution,<br />
solar drying, and transport as low moisture tablets to specific, select coastal conversion centers where the<br />
polysaccharides are recovered for conversion to plastics in order to make true techno-economic sense.<br />
This sort of analysis is highly desirable, and has its own set of critical success factors.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
The scientific data input and market/regulatory environment for siting are not well considered and plans<br />
to make adjustments to this problem were not evident in the presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 3<br />
PIs ought to perform an ecological and environmental impact analysis to properly assess feasibility.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 6<br />
See Approach comments.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
Critical success factors were identified, but there was relatively little explicit discussion about the main<br />
challenges in kelp conversion and how they would be overcome.<br />
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