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2011 Algae Platform Review – <strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong> are direct transcripts of commentary and material provided by the Platform’s<br />

Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />

this source of samples. We are also in the process of acquiring samples from closed photobioreactors and<br />

recycled ponds. We are in the process of developing collaborations with industrial partners that operate<br />

production systems.<br />

Project: 9.6.1.5 SRNL<br />

Title: Human Health Risk Assessment of Algal Production Systems: Toxins and Toxic Components,<br />

Harmful VOCs, Metal Speciation/Bioconcentration, and Pathogenic Microorganisms Associated with<br />

Large-Scale Algae Cultivation Systems<br />

Presenter: Chris Yeager<br />

Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />

Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />

Approach 3.14 0.64 7<br />

Progress 3.43 1.05 7<br />

Relevance 3.71 0.70 7<br />

Critical Success Factors 3.14 0.64 7<br />

1. Project Approach<br />

The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />

approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />

The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />

and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />

The Approach lacks enough definition to support the importance of this program. If the issues are fully<br />

encompassing, how does the plan address them? What are the measures that should be employed, and<br />

how does the experimental plan address them? I see Phase 1 , but how do we decide Phase 2 and<br />

especially 3? The importance of the topic demands the best in terms of justification and explanation.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />

This project includes collaboration between SRNL and TAMU-CC with the goal of examining toxins and<br />

toxic algae that develop in algal biofuels' raceways and ponds. The potential for algae causing these<br />

problems to be introduced regularly with commercial-scale culture of defined feedstocks appears<br />

unrealistic. Appropriate background experience in this area and strong knowledge of the rich literature on<br />

HABs was not evident from the presentation.<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />

Multi-dimensional; complementary aspects of lab and field work would combine geochemistry and<br />

biology. Overall objective is to provide experimental data for use in a comprehensive risk assessment of<br />

algae-based biofuel production systems on human health<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />

See other comments<br />

<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />

The goal of the research is to assess health risk associated with large scale algal cultivation and the focus<br />

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