Reviewer Comments - EERE
Reviewer Comments - EERE
Reviewer Comments - EERE
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2011 Algae Platform Review – <strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong> are direct transcripts of commentary and material provided by the Platform’s<br />
Review Panel. They have not been edited or altered by the Biomass Program.<br />
this source of samples. We are also in the process of acquiring samples from closed photobioreactors and<br />
recycled ponds. We are in the process of developing collaborations with industrial partners that operate<br />
production systems.<br />
Project: 9.6.1.5 SRNL<br />
Title: Human Health Risk Assessment of Algal Production Systems: Toxins and Toxic Components,<br />
Harmful VOCs, Metal Speciation/Bioconcentration, and Pathogenic Microorganisms Associated with<br />
Large-Scale Algae Cultivation Systems<br />
Presenter: Chris Yeager<br />
Presentation Date: Friday, April 08, 2011<br />
Criteria Avg Score Std Deviation Count<br />
Approach 3.14 0.64 7<br />
Progress 3.43 1.05 7<br />
Relevance 3.71 0.70 7<br />
Critical Success Factors 3.14 0.64 7<br />
1. Project Approach<br />
The project performers have implemented technically sound research, development, and deployment<br />
approaches and demonstrated necessary results to meet their targets<br />
The project performers have identified a project management plan that includes well-defined milestones<br />
and adequate methods for addressing potential risks.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong> <strong>Comments</strong><br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 1 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The Approach lacks enough definition to support the importance of this program. If the issues are fully<br />
encompassing, how does the plan address them? What are the measures that should be employed, and<br />
how does the experimental plan address them? I see Phase 1 , but how do we decide Phase 2 and<br />
especially 3? The importance of the topic demands the best in terms of justification and explanation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 2 Criteria Score: 2<br />
This project includes collaboration between SRNL and TAMU-CC with the goal of examining toxins and<br />
toxic algae that develop in algal biofuels' raceways and ponds. The potential for algae causing these<br />
problems to be introduced regularly with commercial-scale culture of defined feedstocks appears<br />
unrealistic. Appropriate background experience in this area and strong knowledge of the rich literature on<br />
HABs was not evident from the presentation.<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 3 Criteria Score: 4<br />
Multi-dimensional; complementary aspects of lab and field work would combine geochemistry and<br />
biology. Overall objective is to provide experimental data for use in a comprehensive risk assessment of<br />
algae-based biofuel production systems on human health<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 4 Criteria Score: 3<br />
See other comments<br />
<strong>Reviewer</strong>: 5 Criteria Score: 3<br />
The goal of the research is to assess health risk associated with large scale algal cultivation and the focus<br />
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