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202 PART THREE A Strategy<br />

MAKE YOUR SUBJECT APPROPRIATELY SPECIFIC<br />

The subject in a careful judgment is appropriately specific. Consider<br />

these sentences, in which the subject is italicized:<br />

Today’s college students are less proficient in grammar and usage than<br />

their counterparts were ten years ago.<br />

Today’s U.S. college students are less proficient in grammar and usage<br />

than their counterparts were ten years ago.<br />

Today’s U.S. two-year college students are less proficient in grammar<br />

and usage than their counterparts were ten years ago.<br />

Today’s students at this college are less proficient in grammar and<br />

usage than their counterparts were ten years ago.<br />

If the evidence covers only students at a particular college, only the<br />

last judgment can be sound. The other three are too generalized. To avoid<br />

this kind of error in your writing and speaking, choose the subjects of<br />

your judgments with care.<br />

MAKE YOUR PREDICATE EXACT<br />

The predicate in a careful judgment asserts exactly what you want to<br />

assert. Compare these sentences, in which part of the predicate is italicized:<br />

Peace has been achieved.<br />

Peace can be achieved.<br />

Peace must be achieved.<br />

Peace should be achieved.<br />

Peace could be achieved.<br />

Peace will be achieved.<br />

Although these sentences are very similar in construction, their<br />

meanings are very different. Unless we deliberately embrace ambiguity (in<br />

which case we should expect to cause confusion), we should choose our<br />

predicates judiciously.<br />

A good example of the kind of confusion that can result is shown in<br />

the sentence that triggered theological debate in the 1960s: “God is dead.”<br />

It made a nice slogan, but exactly what did it mean? Taking it by itself, a<br />

person would have great difficulty answering. In addition to the obvious<br />

possibility, “There is no supreme being,” there are at least seven others:<br />

People no longer want to believe God exists.<br />

People are no longer able to believe God exists.<br />

People are no longer certain God exists.<br />

People no longer act as if God exists.

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