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otated in a way that reflects the authors' distinct perception of<br />
things.<br />
Elsewhere, from “Tracery”:<br />
“The clockwork/train runs/on a circular track, between/nowhere<br />
and nowhere else,” and "Doors with no apparent<br />
connection/between rooms dominate/the homes in the city<br />
perched/on a cliff/overlooking the sea” invite us into a desolate<br />
cosmos where nature can be either a friend or foe - or even an<br />
indifferent force: "rain, no rain, it's all the same"<br />
Now onto the ghazals. Ghazals originated in Arabic poetry, and<br />
can be thought of as akin to sonnets in the sense that the form<br />
dictates a certain structure, and even meter. In the case of the<br />
ghazal, usually the structure consists of couplets, around five or<br />
seven, but sometimes as many as fifteen. A repeated word or<br />
phrase appears and the end of both lines of the first couplet and at<br />
the end of the second line in each subsequent couplet. Rhymes or<br />
near-rhymes are also present.<br />
Michelle and Sheila took a more elastic approach to ghazals,<br />
however - they took a stringent, some would even say stifling,<br />
structure and broke it apart to mold a new form, one that breathes a<br />
bit more but maintains the integrity of the original form.<br />
We will start with Ghazal Four, which was the first one I<br />
earmarked in the book when I initially read it. The poem itself is a<br />
dense thicket of abstract imagery alternating with tangible<br />
impressions, layered with fevered philosophizing akin to a<br />
Nietschze or Hiedegger. In this poem, I get a sense of weariness<br />
and wariness about one's own identity, and accumulating<br />
sensations of self-doubt ("To all my half selves below the deck/Are<br />
mirrors of inadmissible distance."). This is further reflected in the<br />
"pulsating mirror" that "sputtered questions to oneself." That said,