9502320 Comp English I Ja06 - JMap

Anchor Paper – Part B—Level 6 – A
Anchor Level 6 – A
Quality
Meaning
Development
Organization
Language Use
Conventions
Commentary
The response:
Provides an interpretation of the critical lens that is faithful to the complexity of the statement,
explaining that the power, communicated through literature, is learning about oneself. The
response uses the criteria to make an insightful analysis of To Kill a Mockingbird and “Dr.
Heidegger’s Experiment,” illustrating how both works prove that through the questioning that
goes on within the subconscious, one learns much about who they are.
Develops ideas clearly and fully, making effective use of a wide range of relevant and specific
evidence about characters whose actions communicate insight to the reader (While many people
lose their childhood open-mindedness, Atticus found … his beliefs and Heidegger used people
who felt sorry … miserable in their old age). The response includes references to setting
(southern town of Maycomb) and characterization of melancholy old creatures.
Maintains the focus that when “literature” inspires imagination and inquisitiveness, it is truly a
powerful and unique force. The response exhibits a logical and coherent structure, first
comparing Scout’s curiosity and fresh imagination of a child to Atticus Finch’s childhood
open-mindedness, and then presenting the steps in Doctor Heidegger’s experiment about human
nature and its consequence. Transitions are skillfully used (Through internalizing the
circumstances of others, Specifically, Once again).
Is stylistically sophisticated, using language that is precise and engaging (unbridled curiosity,
harboring the curiosity, squanders, revel in their youth), with a notable sense of voice. The
response varies structure and length of sentences to enhance meaning (Atticus was different and
When “literature” inspires imagination and inquisitiveness, it is truly a powerful and unique
force).
Demonstrates control of the conventions with essentially no errors, even with sophisticated
language.
Conclusion: Overall, the response best fits the criteria for Level 6 in all qualities.
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