9502320 Comp English I Ja06 - JMap

Anchor Level 3 – B
Quality
Meaning
Development
Organization
Language Use
Conventions
Commentary
The response:
Conveys a basic understanding of the documents (Manatees have scars … because of boat
propellers). The response makes few and superficial connections between information and
ideas in the documents and the assigned task (Something has to be done and educate the
public).
Develops ideas briefly, using details from the documents relative to watercraft collisions as the
cause of death For Manatees.
Establishes an appropriate focus on manatees and boats. The response exhibits a rudimentary
structure and includes some irrelevancies (Fines and Classes … to obtain a boating license).
Relies on basic vocabulary (a lot and stuff), with some awareness of audience (Something must
be done). The response primarily relies on simple sentences.
Demonstrates emerging control, exhibiting occasional errors in spelling (seperate and
eachother), random use of capitalization (There are Now, Left, Further), and grammar (less
than 2,000 and work good).
Conclusion: Overall, the response best fits the criteria for Level 3 in all qualities.
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