9502320 Comp English I Ja06 - JMap

Anchor Paper – Part A—Level 2 – A
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Anchor Level 2 – A
Quality
Meaning
Development
Organization
Language Use
Conventions
Commentary
The response:
Conveys a confused understanding of the text (obligations of doctors … have to be “vocation”).
The response alludes to the text but makes unwarranted connections to the assigned task (I hope
this speech has helped you All).
Is incomplete and largely undeveloped, hinting at ideas, but references to the text are vague
(You have to be at your very best and Back then).
Suggests a focus on advice to doctors (This is a very symblic step) but lacks organization.
Relies on basic vocabulary, with little awareness of audience (everybody needs you). The
response exhibits some attempt to vary sentence structure, but with uneven success (as the
population ages to when people have HIV).
Demonstrates emerging control, exhibiting occasional errors in spelling (memerobal, Medician,
reconitions), punctuation (In your life ths), and pronoun referents (This is a very symblic step)
that hinder comprehension.
Conclusion: Overall, the response best fits the criteria for Level 2, although it is somewhat
stronger in language use and conventions.
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