9502320 Comp English I Ja06 - JMap

Anchor Paper – Part B—Level 6 – B
Anchor Level 6 – B
Quality
Meaning
Development
Organization
Language Use
Conventions
Commentary
The response:
Provides a thoughtful interpretation of the critical lens (This quote suggests that any work which
is classified as “literature” has a purpose to transmit a powerful message or theme to the
reader). The response uses the criteria to make a clear and reasoned analysis of the power of
love in Ethan Frome and the amazing power of conscience in The Scarlet Letter.
Develops ideas clearly and fully, making effective use of a wide range of relevant and specific
evidence about Ethan’s dilemma when he finds he is in love with his wife’s cousin and
Dimmesdale’s attempts to keep his identity as the father a secret. The response integrates
references to setting (Starkfield, Massachusetts and Puritan America), as well as imagery
(fragile, beautiful girl who is surrounded by light), and also provides a detailed characterization
of Dimmesdale (respected church official … respected by everyone in town).
Maintains the focus on literature’s power. The response exhibits a logical and coherent structure
by first contrasting Zeena (cold, sickly and unloving) and Mattie (bright and radiant). The
response then contrasts Dimmesdale’s actions and his conscience (On several occasions he
even inflicted physical pain … to supplement the emotional trauma that he was enduring),
concluding that the “power” communicated in writing is crucial for the purpose of teaching the
audience and for provoking thought. Transitions are skillfully used (His love is also, This
literary work, Both are pieces).
Is stylistically sophisticated, using language that is precise and engaging (dilemma,
contemplates, curtail, depiction of the dark Zeena), with a notable sense of voice and awareness
of audience and purpose. The response varies sentence structure to enhance meaning (His
battles with his own conscience … toward Hester Prynne’s suffering).
Demonstrates control of the conventions with essentially no errors, even with sophisticated
language.
Conclusion: Overall, the response best fits the criteria for Level 6, although it is somewhat weaker
in meaning.
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