9502320 Comp English I Ja06 - JMap

Anchor Level 3 – C
Quality
Meaning
Development
Organization
Language Use
Conventions
Commentary
The response:
Conveys a basic understanding of the text, explaining that comfort and … patients well being
are key obligations of doctors. The response makes superficial connections between information
and ideas in the text and the assigned task (The doctor is required to make sure the patient is
taken care of and … helped).
Is largely undeveloped, hinting at ideas, but references to the text are vague (The doctor needs
to make a good feeling in the room and If a patient is sick, the doctor is required to care of
them).
Establishes a focus on doctor’s roles. The response exhibits a rudimentary structure, discussing
two obligations sequentially (making a patient comfortable and taking care of the patient),
followed by a conclusion.
Relies on basic vocabulary that is sometimes inexact (many certain roles to play and conformity
for “comfort”). The response makes some attempt to vary sentence structure, but with uneven
success (Without these … nervous and restless).
Demonstrates partial control, exhibiting occasional errors in punctuation (doctors obligations;
sick. The doctor; when they did they), agreement (doctor … them, patient … them, doctor…
their), and proofreading (they, they) that do not hinder comprehension.
Conclusion: Overall, the response best fits the criteria for Level 3, although it is somewhat
stronger in conventions and somewhat weaker in development.
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