9502320 Comp English I Ja06 - JMap

Anchor Level 2 – B
Quality
Meaning
Development
Organization
Language Use
Conventions
Commentary
The response:
Provides an incomplete interpretation of the critical lens (decisions to communicate against
their will and tell their tale through acting). The response alludes to the critical lens but does
not use it to analyze The Crucible and Of Mice and Men.
Is largely undeveloped, hinting at ideas, but references to the texts are vague (he only acts his
way through communications and George and Lennie are another example of communication).
Lacks an appropriate focus on literature’s communication of power. The response suggests
some organization through paragraphing.
Uses language that is imprecise (communicate against their will and he only acts his way). The
response reveals little awareness of how to use sentences to achieve an effect (power” this
certainly true and for example … of accounts).
Demonstrates emerging control, exhibiting occasional errors in spelling (wheather), punctuation
(power” this, For example John, and Men characters), and grammar (this certainly true) that
hinder comprehension.
Conclusion: Overall, the response best fits the criteria for Level 2, although it is somewhat
stronger in conventions.
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