9502320 Comp English I Ja06 - JMap

Anchor Paper – Part B—Level 1 – A
Anchor Level 1 – A
Quality
Meaning
Development
Organization
Language Use
Conventions
Commentary
The response:
Provides an incomplete interpretation of the critical lens (This critical lense means to me
everything that you read communicates power). The response makes no reference to any
specific texts.
Is minimal, reiterating the idea that the reader will get something or learn something valuable
from literature, but with no evidence of textual development.
Lacks an appropriate focus but suggests some organization. The response introduces the lens,
stating that literature is just a source of knowledge, and summarizes in a concluding paragraph
(I agree with this quote because every little thing you read you get a message or you get
something from it).
Relies on basic vocabulary that is sometimes imprecise (peace for “piece”), with little
awareness of purpose. The response exhibits some attempt to vary sentence structure, but with
uneven success (Regardless on what it is you seek communication power).
Demonstrates emerging control, exhibiting occasional errors in spelling (lense) and usage
(Regardless on) that do not hinder comprehension.
Conclusion: Although the response fits criteria for Levels 1, 2 and 3, it remains at Level 1
because the response makes no reference to any text.
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