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OMAHA STEAKS "PROSPECTING" LETTER<br />

One of the most successful direct marketers is Omaha Steaks International. Executive vice president<br />

Fred Simon is a strong believer in constant testing to seek out new approaches that will beat<br />

his long-running control letter. But so powerful is his classic prospecting letter, even the nation's<br />

top letter writers have been unable to beat it. The mailing features a check made out to the recipient,<br />

and a "Johnson Box" at the top of the letter:<br />

The letter begins:<br />

USE THE ENCLOSED CHECK IN YOUR NAME — in the amount of<br />

$23.00 to get more than a 43% discount on your first box of succulent<br />

Omaha Steaks. Treat yourself to the world's most tender beef,<br />

guaranteed to please you ... at attractive, introductory savings. So<br />

please read this letter right now. If you love good steaks, you'll find<br />

my story interesting — and my offer very tempting!<br />

Can you recall the best steak you ever tasted in your life? One that<br />

was tender, juicy and just full of flavor? I'll bet you can. Most likely,<br />

it was served at an exclusive restaurant or supper club.<br />

I'm writing to you because I believe you would enjoy a box of my<br />

"fork-tender" Omaha Steaks ... the same steaks I sell to fine restaurants<br />

. . . shipped frozen, directly to you. Here's my story.<br />

The letter goes on to explain where fine restaurants get their fine steaks (Omaha Steaks, of course)<br />

and ends with a powerful close:<br />

To order by mail, just endorse the enclosed check, fill in the order<br />

form, enclose your payment — then use the postage-free envelope<br />

before the date shown on your check. After that date, I'll select a new<br />

group of people to receive this rare offer — and your chance will be<br />

past. So please respond now.<br />

Your satisfaction is fully guaranteed.<br />

www.greatestsalesletters.com - 190 -

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