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THE NESTLE COMPANY "KEY" LETTER<br />

The following letter pulled a 67% response, and was written by Milton Pierce, who said:<br />

■ This letter had the greatest response of any direct mail letter I've ever written. Why<br />

did it do so well? Because it gave a truly sensational offer — $400 in free merchandise<br />

— to exactly the right list: 7,000 owners of new vending machines. Not only did<br />

the letter get good results, it also won a DMMA award for me.<br />

Dear Sir:<br />

There's a key attached to this letter — a very special key — that<br />

unlocks three valuable gifts from Nestle for you.<br />

It's our way of saying "congratulations" on your new vending<br />

machines. We were delighted to help in the financing of this equipment.<br />

And now we'd also like to help you get the greatest profits<br />

from this new equipment.<br />

That's where the key enters into the picture . . .<br />

In just a few days you'll receive a package from Nestle. This key will<br />

unlock that package — to reveal three valuable gifts:<br />

First, the key unlocks a personal gift for you — something you'll use<br />

and enjoy for years.<br />

Second, the key unlocks a gift for your vending machine — a very<br />

special free offer that's worth over $200.00!<br />

Third, the key unlocks the secret of lifetime profits from your vending<br />

machines — proven ideas that can add many dollars to your<br />

income.<br />

So save this key — and look for your gift package from Nestle. It will<br />

be coming in just a few days.<br />

P.S. Our gift package is for the man in your organization who<br />

purchases merchandise for your vending machines . . . Please forward<br />

this letter to this "Key Man." Thank you.<br />

www.greatestsalesletters.com - 322 -

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