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Chapter Essay Assignment 79<br />

Questions:<br />

HOW MUCH information does the Nike's website provide? Shoe's<br />

characteristics-cushioning, motion control, stability, weight-are<br />

easy to understand.<br />

WHY is Nike's website better than Saucony's in these areas?<br />

Saucony's website doesn't list each shoe's weight, gives less info.<br />

HOW MUCH information does the Saucony's site provide? lt lists<br />

shoe's characteristics but uses technical terminology (example:<br />

"medial midsole post").<br />

WHY is the additional information given by Nike important?<br />

Weight is important to runners. Heavy shoes affect performance<br />

and endurance (personal example).<br />

Conclusion:The needs of most consumers are better met by the<br />

qualities of the Nike website.<br />

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Review your "working" thesis statement and the questions you expect to<br />

answer in your essay. On separate paper, rewrite your working thesis. Then,<br />

1. On additional paper, write topic sentences for two or three of your<br />

body paragraphs in response to the questions about your thesis<br />

statement.<br />

2. Leave the rest of the page empty after each topic sentence so that<br />

you can list the supporting details from your collected materials.<br />

3. Remember: Use kep,vords and phrases for the controlling ideas in<br />

your topic sentences that refer to the ideas in the thesis statement.<br />

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Reyiew your essay map. Then,<br />

1.<br />

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3.<br />

LE*tEr:s evid*ne*<br />

Under each topic sentence, write three to five WH-questions (who,<br />

what, when, where, why, and how)you will answer in the paragraph<br />

that follows that topic sentence. Use Tyler's chart as a model.<br />

Answer the questions for each body paragraph. If you cannot<br />

answer some of your questions, (a) change your topic sentence or<br />

(b) find additional support by generating more ideas.<br />

Put your essay map in your writing folder.

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