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flip back <strong>and</strong> forth here. Response: Text has been edited to be consistent with captions.P56-57: Figures 5-8 seem to show the same statistics, but the figure titles differ: some have"Precision" in the title <strong>and</strong> others have "Accuracy". The captions should also be re-worded toaccurately describe the contents of the figure as well as providing an indications as to whichyears were Good, Fair, etc. Response: Text has been added, figure titles have beencorrected. Finally, these figures are all cited out of order in the text. Figures 9-10 are cited first.Response: Corrected.Figures: none of the color-schemes can be used when printed in black-<strong>and</strong>-white. Response:We have kept the number of color figures to a minimum <strong>and</strong> adjusted several of the colorfigures so they can be interpreted if printed in black <strong>and</strong> white.P68L1-24: needs to be explained more clearly <strong>and</strong> consistently with Figure 11. The text says thatestimates are biased low, but the figure shows errors that are positive. I can see that it is correct,but one needs to jump through some mental hoops to get on with interpreting the results shownin the figures. Response: Corrected.P73L12: delete one of the "in September"s. Response: Corrected.P74L19: replace "bean" with "beam" Response: Definitely.P75L17: "throughout"? Response: Corrected.P78L1: does "exceeded by a considerable margin" mean that precision was < 25%? Response:Clarified.P79L38: insert "wide" after "m" Response: Corrected.P82L31-32: Is this statement correct, or do I misunderst<strong>and</strong> it? Capping the exploitation ratemeans that there is no upper bound to escapement. Response: Corrected.Table 24: change "run size" to recruitment <strong>and</strong> "log" to "logarithm". Response: This table wasextracted from a DFO report so the headings were not changed.Table 25: indicate the units (1,000s of fish). Response: Corrected.Figure 21: the caption should re-state that enroute losses were not estimated prior to 1992.Response: Corrected.P100L3: why has "<strong>Sockeye</strong>" suddenly become capitalized everywhere? Response: Corrected.P100L28-29: I would delete "with certainty" here, unless one knows the long-term gains, but isjust uncertain. Response: Corrected.P101L11-12: I think that Bradford is just being honest, not pessimistic. Response: edited.P103L25: This short section on Recovery Objectives should appear at the beginning of thissection on P100. It would have provided some important context for the section. Response:edited.M-37

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