Bailey.Academic_Writing

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Writing Test 4
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A COMPARISON OF BORCHESTER AND ROWBOROUGH AS A STUDY
LOCATION
Rowborough is a large industrial city with a population of one and a half million,
while Borchester is an old city with a much smaller population. These basic differences
determine their suitability as centres for a university course.
Rowborough can offer a wider range of leisure facilities but Borchester has a quieter
character. Rowborough may have a worse climate, being cool even in summer and wet
in winter, while winters in Borchester are less cold, though the summers tend to be
wet.
Rowborough is hillier than Borchester, which might be a drawback for cyclists.
However, Rowborough does have a better public transport system, which may
compensate for the hills. Borchester also has a rather remote campus, which
might involve a lot of travelling. It is also likely to be more expensive in terms of
accommodation, and is rather distant from the capital. On the other hand, some areas
in Rowborough suffer from high crime rates.
Clearly, each city has its advantages: Borchester is more likely to suit a student looking
for peace and quiet, who can tolerate some inconvenience, while Rowborough would
be suitable for someone keen to economise and wanting a more lively atmosphere.