Bailey.Academic_Writing

64 The Writing Process: Writing Stages
b) . . . the way the government prepares his citizens to
contribute in the development . . .
c) Secondly, education not only teach people many
knowledge . . .
d) However, weather it is the most important factor is the
issue . . .
e) There has been a sharp decrease between 1930 and
1950.
f) The quality of a society depends in the education
level.
g) America had the biggest figure for crime . . .
7. Proof-reading a longer text is more difficult. The following is
an extract from an essay comparing university education in
Taiwan and the UK.
Correct any errors you find.
There are many similaries to the UK and Taiwan, for
example course fees, assessment and so on. Firstly, both
UK universities and Taiwan universities charge fees from
students, but course fees in the UK is as expensive as that
in Taiwan. In addition, teaching methods are very similar
to both of countries. Students should attend lectures and
seminars. Moreover, they have the same system to assess
students, which are examed at the end of semester.
Nevertheless, there are three main differences: how
students can entry a university and how much percentage
of students are in higher education. Students in higher
education in Taiwan are twice more than in the UK