Bernard Shaw's Remarkable Religion: A Faith That Fits the Facts
Bernard Shaw's Remarkable Religion: A Faith That Fits the Facts
Bernard Shaw's Remarkable Religion: A Faith That Fits the Facts
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Major Barbara 145<br />
which he himself conspicuously belongs. His love of <strong>the</strong> poor is only pity,<br />
which Undershaft contemptuously dismisses as <strong>the</strong> “scavenger of misery.”<br />
His condemnation of <strong>the</strong> English and <strong>the</strong> intellectuals is self-hatred inspired<br />
by guilty consciousness of his own privileges and comforts. His<br />
attempt to achieve moral purity by avoiding contact with wickedness is<br />
doomed. It is not only ruining his health, but when <strong>the</strong> strain is brought to<br />
crisis at <strong>the</strong> conclusion of <strong>the</strong> second act, he suffers what amounts to a<br />
moral nervous collapse and wallows hysterically in what he is convinced is<br />
evil, even to <strong>the</strong> point of getting drunk with <strong>the</strong> man he calls <strong>the</strong> Prince of<br />
Darkness (who stays characteristically sober). Unlike Barbara and Undershaft,<br />
he views transgressions as debts to be repaid. He approves, to Barbara’s<br />
dismay, of Bill’s attempt to pay for his misdeed, and rejects forgiveness,<br />
not (like Shaw and Barbara) because <strong>the</strong> concept is fraudulent, but<br />
because “we must pay our debts” (3: 114, 178). Many critics, <strong>the</strong>mselves<br />
liberal intellectuals, believe that Cusins will be an improvement on <strong>the</strong> old<br />
Andrew Undershaft because of his commitment to arm <strong>the</strong> oppressed<br />
ra<strong>the</strong>r than <strong>the</strong> establishment. This is a desperate hope at best. The new<br />
Undershaft, like <strong>the</strong> old, will have to sell to whom he can in order to thrive,<br />
and can no more make courage and conviction than his predecessor. Barbara<br />
is <strong>the</strong> real hope, because <strong>the</strong> job at hand is to awaken dormant souls.<br />
Revisions<br />
There were two significant trends in <strong>the</strong> many changes Shaw made to <strong>the</strong><br />
final scene of <strong>the</strong> play: one was to make Cusins a strong and more steadfast<br />
advocate of <strong>the</strong> idealist viewpoint. The o<strong>the</strong>r was to pull Barbara more into<br />
<strong>the</strong> background. The portrayal of Cusins in <strong>the</strong> Derry manuscript is dramatically<br />
unfocused; in <strong>the</strong> final version he is a stronger opponent to<br />
Undershaft. Speeches are added to set him apart from Undershaft and o<strong>the</strong>rs<br />
deleted that had shown him coming over to <strong>the</strong> older man’s position.<br />
The original ending was less ambiguous with respect to <strong>the</strong> struggle between<br />
Cusins and Undershaft. Barbara, on <strong>the</strong> o<strong>the</strong>r hand, has considerably<br />
less to say in <strong>the</strong> final version of <strong>the</strong> last scene. Some of her dialogue,<br />
like her reproach to her fa<strong>the</strong>r about robbing from her a human soul, is<br />
moved to earlier in <strong>the</strong> play. Some minor lines are given to o<strong>the</strong>r characters,<br />
and o<strong>the</strong>rs are cut. Curiously, <strong>the</strong> effect of this is to give her greater<br />
strength, as <strong>the</strong> men are engaged in a struggle for her—more specifically,<br />
for <strong>the</strong> spiritual power and moral authority she represents. The parable is<br />
also better served since some of her almost peevish objections to <strong>the</strong> muni-