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The original slide showcases various problems:
the clip art does not reinforce the simple
statistic, nor does it fit the theme of women in
the Japanese labor market; the background is
a tired, overused PowerPoint template; and the
text is difficult to read.
While the text on this slide is easy to read and
the clip art is a bit more appropriate to the
subject, it still does not give the slide a strong
visual impact or a professional look and feel.
This slide displays the same information in a
typical pie chart. The chart’s 3D effects and
extra lines, however, do not improve the impact
or readability of the information.
In this case, the two bullet points are easy
to read in an instant. The photo of an actual
female part-time worker in Japan is a step
in the right direction, but it could still be
much better.
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