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How to Write a Radio Serial Drama for Social Development- PDF

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Chapter Eleven: Script Presentation 161<br />

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heads briefly away from the microphone when they move from one page<br />

<strong>to</strong> the next, making it difficult <strong>to</strong> read lines. In the sample script on the<br />

next page, line 14, which is an incomplete speech, should have been<br />

moved <strong>to</strong> the next page.<br />

Remarks column. This is described following the sample script page.<br />

❶ Series Title: Cut Your Coat According <strong>to</strong> Your Cloth Page 1 of 2<br />

Episode #3 Draft: #2<br />

<strong>Write</strong>r: Caber Gartaula Date: Oc<strong>to</strong>ber 31<br />

❷ 1. BIR BAHADUR: (SLIGHTLY NERVOUS) What happened,<br />

did you not ask the health worker<br />

❸ 2. BELI: I should not ask the Health Worker such<br />

things...rather I should do what the younger<br />

father-in-law <strong>to</strong>ld us <strong>to</strong> do. Do you know<br />

why your older sister-in-law had<br />

miscarriages<br />

3. BIR BA: Why<br />

4. BELI: He said that after conception Laxmi did not<br />

take enough nutritious food and<br />

enough rest.<br />

5. BIR BA: Forget the past. Since you are at home, why<br />

don’t you take care of her<br />

❹ 6. BELI: No, no, something has happened <strong>to</strong> me like<br />

what has happened <strong>to</strong> older sister-in-law.<br />

(VERY SHY) It is two months....<br />

7. BIR BA: VERY HAPPY) Is it so It is two months<br />

already.Have you <strong>to</strong>ld anybody else<br />

8. BELI: Yes, other women know women’s<br />

business...only you...<br />

❺ 9. BIR BA: And now I know <strong>to</strong>o.... I am very happy.<br />

❻ 10. MUSIC. SCENE CHANGE MUSIC. BRIEF :05<br />

11. FX. NOISE OF FRYING AND STIRRING VEGETABLE<br />

CURRY.<br />

12. BELI: Why are you in the kitchen so early, older<br />

sister-in-law<br />

13. LAXMI: Today I am preparing food early <strong>for</strong> the<br />

father-in-law only.<br />

❼ 14. MAYADEVI: Your father-in-law has <strong>to</strong> go <strong>to</strong> the fields<br />

early, so<br />

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