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How to Write a Radio Serial Drama for Social Development- PDF

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Chapter Thirteen: The Value of Editing 203<br />

Konoweeka Page 4 of 10<br />

Episode #8 Draft: #11<br />

<strong>Write</strong>r: Kiyingi Oc<strong>to</strong>ber 1996<br />

48. NSUB: Forget about going <strong>to</strong> Nkwekwe <strong>for</strong> the<br />

time being. Pay whatever you have <strong>to</strong> the<br />

hospital and pay the rest later.<br />

49. SSEKA: Don’t be ridiculous, Bob. The hospital<br />

would never allow that.<br />

50. NSUB: (AMUSED) They will be able <strong>to</strong> get you<br />

when Aida goes <strong>to</strong> deliver. By the way,<br />

has it occurred <strong>to</strong> you that she might also<br />

have twins.<br />

51. SSEKA: (PROUDLY) That would be wonderful!<br />

Imagine me, Ssekalegga with four<br />

children in one year!<br />

52. NSUB: That would add up <strong>to</strong> 24 children at 35<br />

years of age...and still going strong.<br />

53. SSEKA: Enough of this <strong>to</strong>mfoolery. Get me the<br />

money <strong>to</strong> collect my wife from the<br />

hospital.<br />

54. NSUB: My friend, not planning your family is the<br />

same as trying <strong>to</strong> build a fashionable<br />

house without a plan. Your children<br />

become a burden on society.<br />

55. SSEKA: (AMUSED) It is not a lecture I need right<br />

now. It is money. I shall repay very<br />

quickly.<br />

56. NSUB: I <strong>to</strong>ld you that I do not have any money<br />

and advise you <strong>to</strong> cancel your trip <strong>to</strong><br />

Nkwekwe, since there isn’t any pressing<br />

problem there right now.<br />

57. SSEKA: What makes you think that<br />

58. NSUB: You mean there is a problem<br />

59. SSEKA: (GETTING FED UP. HE CALLS) Mrs.<br />

Nsubuga, I have <strong>to</strong> go <strong>to</strong> the hospital<br />

now, so that Peter’s brothers can get<br />

something <strong>to</strong> wear.<br />

60. NSUB: You mean they have had no clothes all<br />

this time<br />

61. SSEKA: That’s right. We had brought only one<br />

garment because we were expecting only<br />

one child.<br />

62. NSUB: You mean <strong>to</strong> say you brought only one<br />

garment since you expected only one<br />

child.<br />

Will an audience who has not listened previously<br />

know who Aida is<br />

Is this introduction of the message natural<br />

and subtle<br />

Is the audience likely <strong>to</strong> be attracted <strong>to</strong> or deeply<br />

interested in either one of these characters<br />

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