How to Write a Radio Serial Drama for Social Development- PDF
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Chapter Thirteen: The Value of Editing 203<br />
Konoweeka Page 4 of 10<br />
Episode #8 Draft: #11<br />
<strong>Write</strong>r: Kiyingi Oc<strong>to</strong>ber 1996<br />
48. NSUB: Forget about going <strong>to</strong> Nkwekwe <strong>for</strong> the<br />
time being. Pay whatever you have <strong>to</strong> the<br />
hospital and pay the rest later.<br />
49. SSEKA: Don’t be ridiculous, Bob. The hospital<br />
would never allow that.<br />
50. NSUB: (AMUSED) They will be able <strong>to</strong> get you<br />
when Aida goes <strong>to</strong> deliver. By the way,<br />
has it occurred <strong>to</strong> you that she might also<br />
have twins.<br />
51. SSEKA: (PROUDLY) That would be wonderful!<br />
Imagine me, Ssekalegga with four<br />
children in one year!<br />
52. NSUB: That would add up <strong>to</strong> 24 children at 35<br />
years of age...and still going strong.<br />
53. SSEKA: Enough of this <strong>to</strong>mfoolery. Get me the<br />
money <strong>to</strong> collect my wife from the<br />
hospital.<br />
54. NSUB: My friend, not planning your family is the<br />
same as trying <strong>to</strong> build a fashionable<br />
house without a plan. Your children<br />
become a burden on society.<br />
55. SSEKA: (AMUSED) It is not a lecture I need right<br />
now. It is money. I shall repay very<br />
quickly.<br />
56. NSUB: I <strong>to</strong>ld you that I do not have any money<br />
and advise you <strong>to</strong> cancel your trip <strong>to</strong><br />
Nkwekwe, since there isn’t any pressing<br />
problem there right now.<br />
57. SSEKA: What makes you think that<br />
58. NSUB: You mean there is a problem<br />
59. SSEKA: (GETTING FED UP. HE CALLS) Mrs.<br />
Nsubuga, I have <strong>to</strong> go <strong>to</strong> the hospital<br />
now, so that Peter’s brothers can get<br />
something <strong>to</strong> wear.<br />
60. NSUB: You mean they have had no clothes all<br />
this time<br />
61. SSEKA: That’s right. We had brought only one<br />
garment because we were expecting only<br />
one child.<br />
62. NSUB: You mean <strong>to</strong> say you brought only one<br />
garment since you expected only one<br />
child.<br />
Will an audience who has not listened previously<br />
know who Aida is<br />
Is this introduction of the message natural<br />
and subtle<br />
Is the audience likely <strong>to</strong> be attracted <strong>to</strong> or deeply<br />
interested in either one of these characters<br />
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