Life – a user's manual Part II - Boksidan

- I will probably go home now, I must have some cold or something. Lisa have been home for a few days,
that's probably her cold that I received.
- Yeah! Said Thomas, they're like little viral bombs. But it's okay, we tell the boss. Is there something else
that we should do
I shook my head while I thanked them and felt a little heat from their kindness spread in my body. Then I
went as fast as I could without even turning off the computer or reprogram the phone. I did not stop to talk to
anyone during the walk down to the car, except for one guy from the design department who I greeted when
passing. The weather was autumnal with a light rain that would otherwise not have troubled me so much
during the short walk to the car. Now it got me to freeze so that my hands were shaking. I had to sit for
several minutes with the climate system on maximum heat, before I released the handbrake, put in a gear and
drove away."
It got worse, right
If you let the main character observe and tell us what is happening it is, as I said, important to note that the
text match how it would have sounded if the imaginary protagonist had told the story himself. Furthermore,
one should avoid describing events that he would not have thought it would be interesting to tell. It is also
important to remember that people usually leave out all unnecessary environmental descriptions in oral
storytelling. In addition, most people use a more undifferentiated language with many repetitions, for
example, "he came, then she came," compared with conventional written language.
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