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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
potential through technology development, economies of scale and
learning-by-doing processes. All is written in a linear where
potential below some costs are to be identified and then tapped by
appropriate policies. The real world is more complex as these
policies, while they exhaust part of thes potentials may also
contribute to create new potentials through technology dynamics.
(Cédric PHILIBERT, International Energy Agency)
SPM-44 24 A 0 0 0 0 Why is the activities in the CDM only covered in the waste section:
The information on the number of CDM project for all types can be
updated using table 2, table 9, chart 1, and chart 2 in the "Analysis"
sheet in the "UNEP Risoe CDM/JI Pipeline" published monthly on
the www.cd4cdm.org web site at the address:
www.cd4cdm.org/Publications/CDMpipeline.xls
(Jørgen Fenhann, Risø)
SPM-45 0 A 0 0 0 0 "high confidence" and "midium confidence" etc need to be clearly
defined.
(Koji Kadono, Global Industrial and Social Progress Research
Institute(GISPRI))
SPM-46 0 A 0 0 0 0 Throughout the text, when discussing stabilisation level, both
W/m2 and ppmv are used and it is very confusing.
(Koji Kadono, Global Industrial and Social Progress Research
Institute(GISPRI))
Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
Action
for
chapter
ACC; move CDM to para 29 10,13
ACC; add uncertainty annex CG
Uncertai
nty
ACC; W/m2 will be dropped;
CO2 eq only
Keep it in table but simplify in
text
Considerations
by the writing
team
currently not
reflected in
SPM whilst it
should.
The questions is
: is there enough
literature to
make a
statement on the
costs related to
ITC. Chapter 3
suggests to park
it until we get to
section 7.
3 rejected.
Equivalences
available in
Table 1
(3) Discussion:
Naki: more
transparent to
use different
metrics because
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