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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
19 A 13 15 13 16
(Cédric PHILIBERT, International Energy Agency)
Please change/add: "…control of CH4, N2O, HFC, PFC and SF6
emissions..." To include SF6 is in line with the information in
chapter 7.
(Government of Germany)
19 A 13 15 0 0 add: renewable energy
(Government of Germany)
19 B 13 16 15 16 Delete the word "However"
(Government of Switzerland)
17 A 12 36 13 5 Please provide reference to the quote of up to 60% emissions in the
buildings prevented by 2020.
(Government of UK)
19 A 13 17 13 17 Inappropriate tense. Reword "is respecting" to "respects."
(Government of Environment Canada)
19 A 13 17 13 17 Delete:" that is respecting international competitiveness". Different
countries have different policy priorities - competiveness may or
may not be one.
(Government of Environment Canada)
19 A 13 17 13 17 For the sake of clarity the authors should delete "is respect" replace
with "does not harm".
(Government of Australia)
19 A 13 17 13 17 “… a stable policy environment that is respecting international
competitiveness…” First, it is not clear whether the stable policy
environment refers to national or global policy environment.
Second, respecting the international competitiveness is already in
the domains of treaties like WTO, together with the permitted
exceptions.
(Government of India)
19 A 13 19 13 19 To add: ¨....and economic incentives); and the establishment of
sustainable production patterns. In the same way is necessary to
reduce the differences between developed and developing countries
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Expert Review of Second-Order-Draft
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote
Response suggested by cochairs
Action
for
chapter
ACC OK
(7)
ACC; modify “fuel shifts to also
include shift to renewable fuels
or electricity
ACC
REJ; no refs in SPM
OK
(7)
Considerations
by the writing
team
Renewable
energy OK,
electricity no
(7)
Prefer A-934 OK
(7)
REJ; competitiveness is
Suggest deleting
important to industry
“international”
(7)
ACC OK
(7)
ACC; add “national” before
“policy environment”;
competitiveness is also a
national issue
OK
(7)
REJ; not consistent with chapter Reject
(7)
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