SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
SODBatch A&B SPM Comments co-chair response final ... - ipcc-wg3
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Chapter-<br />
Comment<br />
para<br />
Batch<br />
From Page<br />
From Line<br />
To Page<br />
To line<br />
<strong>Comments</strong><br />
IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Se<strong>co</strong>nd Order Draft<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-57 4 B 4 22 4 22 … mitigation, and …(add a <strong>co</strong>mma after "mitigation")<br />
(Jean-Pascal van YPERSELE, Université catholique de Louvain<br />
(Belgium))<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
320<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
321<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
322<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>-<br />
323<br />
4 A 4 23 4 24 “Decisions..…. intertwined’. A loose sentence <strong>co</strong>uld be deleted or<br />
explained more clearly.<br />
(Government of India)<br />
4 A 4 24 4 24 It might be worth adding at the end of the sentence: "…<br />
intertwined, making it difficult to separate the effect of explicit<br />
climate policies from the effect of broader energy and development<br />
policies on greenhouse gas emissions."<br />
(Andy Reisinger, TSU IPCC Synthesis Report)<br />
4 A 4 25 4 25 Please insert here a brief discussion of the likely effects of high oil<br />
prices on emission trends, for the information of policy makers.<br />
High oil prices foster energy efficiency improvements and make<br />
nuclear, renewable, but also non-<strong>co</strong>nventional oil resources, and<br />
above all, <strong>co</strong>al, more profitable. Given the role the <strong>co</strong>al substitution<br />
rates they postulate in the power sector but also in the transport<br />
sector (thanks to <strong>co</strong>al to liquid technologies with very high<br />
upstream emission levels), various modelling exercises show<br />
5<br />
he<br />
ad<br />
in<br />
g<br />
(Cédric PHILIBERT, International Energy Agency)<br />
A 5 0 0 0 Footnote 3: Extend text in line 3 as follows: '…overshoot<br />
scenarios). Impacts from such scenarios will be greater than<br />
scenarios without overshoot, especially if the temporary excursion<br />
crosses one or more tipping points, and in general their feasibility<br />
of such scenarios depends on the future ability of the biosphere to<br />
remove carbon.'<br />
(,)<br />
Expert Review of Se<strong>co</strong>nd-Order-Draft<br />
Confidential, Do Not Cite or Quote<br />
Response suggested by <strong>co</strong><strong>chair</strong>s<br />
Action<br />
for<br />
chapter<br />
Considerations<br />
by the writing<br />
team<br />
ACC, text deleted<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
TIA – Section<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
TIA in reformulating, text<br />
TIA – Section<br />
deleted<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
TIA in reformulating, text<br />
TIA – Section<br />
deleted<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
REJ; not in this place, but see<br />
TIA – Section<br />
A-256<br />
needs redrafting<br />
to ac<strong>co</strong>unt for<br />
<strong>co</strong>mments<br />
(1)<br />
REJ; too technical<br />
<strong>SPM</strong>- 5 A 5 0 0 0 Note 3 in this page <strong>co</strong>uld be deleted ACC; move to table<br />
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