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IPCC WGIII Fourth Assessment Report, Second Order Draft
have to be made, e.g. by adding to the first sentence "because in
many other regions where no policies have been implemented,
emissions resulted to be higher than estimated before.".
(Rob Swart, MNP)
4 A 4 17 0 19 Add the acknowledgement that some of these policies may not yet
have had enough time to result in significant effects on global
emissions.
(Stephen Sheppard, University of British Columbia)
4 A 4 17 4 19 Please correct the tenses and grammar in this sentence to improve
clarity. I think it should read: "Policies related to climate change,
energy security and supply, and sustainable development, have led
to emissions lower than baseline projections in some regions, but
these relative reductions have not been large enough to significantly
affect the global emissions trend."
(Andy Reisinger, TSU IPCC Synthesis Report)
4 A 4 17 4 17 Is beautiful and tranquilizing but need references to be credible.
(Juan F Llanes-Regueiro, Havana University)
4 A 4 17 4 20 Worth giving examples of which policies and which countries have
led to savings compared with baselines?
(Government of UK)
4 A 4 17 4 18 It is suggested to delete "sustainable development" because the
original sentence somewhat undervalue the importance of
sustainable development. It is common sense that sustainable
development is the most effective way to address climate change.
(Government of China Meteorological Administration)
4 A 4 17 4 24 Suggest to move section 4 upwards above the current section 2:
Section 1 describes historic trends, section 4 then describes
deviations from baseline projections made in the past, section 2
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ACC; reformulate TIA (Rick/Bill)
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p17 ff of
Chapter 1
ACC TIA (Rick/Bill)
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p17 ff of
Chapter 1
(1)
No references in SPM; material
is in ch 1 and 12
No space in SPM; make sure it
is properly done in TS and ch 1
and 12
REJ; if it is well known to
some, it is important to repeat it
for others
DISCUSS; suggestion makes
sense, but in light of bringing
projections into figure 1 and
(1)
TIA (Rick/Bill)
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p17 ff of
Chapter 1
(1)
1,12,TS TIA (Rick/Bill)
(1)– link to page
p17 ff of
Chapter 1
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TIA (Rick/Bill)
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p17 ff of
Chapter 1
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1,12 TIA (Rick/Bill)
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p17 ff of
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